by Duane Simolke
Sunday, August 12, 2001
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This poem deals bluntly with unprotected sex among gay men. It might offend some people, which wasn't my intention. It might scare some people, which *was* my intention. "Bareback" is from my book Holding Me Together, which also includes some of my most popular essays (such as "Reactions to Homophobia" and "Not Worth Dying Over").
Louder, louder, the music pulsing
harder. Lights flashing, faster.
Young male bodies grinding harder
on the crowded dance floor,
in the ecstasy of ecstasy.
Heat, sweat, eyes, hands,
another night, pulsing faster
than crystal shooting
through your veins
harder than a stranger
in a hurry, in a daze.
Simply in. He says it’s better
And you think it can’t happen to you,
but if it did, the new magic pills
would make it go away,
but this time it pulses faster
than crystal shooting
through your veins,
faster than insurance running out,
faster than parents walking away,
faster than friends dying off,
faster than a virus mutating,
faster than another cure failing,
faster than the thirty seconds
he wouldn’t take
to open a package
and slide on a condom.
But all that happens off stage.
With perfect hair and perfect clothes,
we live in the safety of the dance floor.
Make up a name,
and tell me, do you ride
skin to skin?
Holding Me Together by Duane Simolke
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|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|A powerful message, well expressed. You have a voice that deserves to be heard. Bravo!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Powerful messages in verse!!!|
|Reviewed by C.S. Snow (Reader)
|ummm...couldn't disagree more, (BB is the natural order of things no matter what the CDC says) but, good write!|
|Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja
|A nice poem.
|Reviewed by Stacey Thompson
|Very well done and heartfelt. You've captured the energy of the dance floor and the emotion. Good job!|
|Reviewed by Jennifer Holly MacDonald
|Thank you for the great work. It flows really well and is easy to read and understand. I wish more poetry was like that.|
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Wow, so powerful and very daring.
Keep up the good work.
|Reviewed by Alex
I placed a link to your "Bareback" poem on www.gayquest.net entrance page. Hope you don't mind. I believe it must be shared with as many people as possible!
|Reviewed by Jacqueline VanZandbeek
|Very well done, once again.
Yes, this is a poem to be shared.
|Reviewed by Trey Bienville
|Wow, well said... Duane!|
|Reviewed by Heather Bricklin (Reader)
|When we give them information, they think it can't happen to them; when we touch their hearts, they know that it can.|
|Reviewed by Tim
|Sad but true|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|this is terrific, duane!!|
|Reviewed by frederico
|Reviewed by Nigel Symon
|Hi Duane this is just a fantastic piece of poetry. Loved every bit of it.|
|Reviewed by Paul Calvin Wilson
|This is excllent. It captures the excitement of meeting someone new in a club, and the frenzied sex that inevitably follows. Stark warning, and very, very good.|
|Reviewed by Krisie Norment (Reader)
|Important message passed along in beautiful message.|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|Very,very powerful piece of work & I agree with C Webb|
|Reviewed by FrankE Robinson
|The voice of social progression dicktates, artificial skin or uncertain fate. It's what we all face in these manGod times of mad science and subjugated minds. Great piece!|
|Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
|Yes a very necessary bit of information to pass along and the poem was fantastic as well!|
|Reviewed by Cyrus Webb
|powerful message... for people of all sexual preferences.
a must to share with others!