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| Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati |
3/15/2009 |
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just a kiss
nothing more." What else is required!Kiss is the captain of the game of love!
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| Reviewed by Laura Mckenzie |
2/10/2009 |
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| Rose I enjoyed your description of a kiss great for the upcoming Valentines day! I loved the line "Steal my breath and heart with just a kiss" Lovely Kindly, Laura :) |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
6/6/2008 |
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| Amazing how a wonderful kiss speaks volumes. -- Jeff |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
3/22/2008 |
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| Seldom is a mere kiss, just a kiss. They carry great responsibilty. Hearts can be broken, with just a kiss. Hearts can be mended, with just a kiss. Very well written poem .Jon Michael Willey |
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| Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz |
3/4/2008 |
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| beautiful and sensual... |
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| Reviewed by Sir Leonardo |
2/19/2008 |
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| whew I need a shower-very Hot!! |
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| Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr |
1/28/2008 |
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Rose,
I see here your talent with the pen is only growing bigger and better writes.
Something simple as a kiss can be the start of so many meories but also can be used as a seal to lock and store them in you forever.
Tommy ~~&&** |
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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
1/28/2008 |
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| The simplicity of this lovely piece of writing is its greatest strength. I enjoyed the author's dedication to the topic and inventiveness in expressing it to the reader. The flow is open and free, tumbling from beginning to end. The imagery is nearly palpable. I felt as though I were there. Great writing! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/26/2008 |
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But a kiss can be symbolic (beyond the physical) and it can mean so much. Nicely done, Rose. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill |
1/26/2008 |
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A kiss can do so much! Though I love your title (and your work), Rose, a kiss is never 'just'.
Best,
R~ |
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| Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo |
1/26/2008 |
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ROse,
Loved this!!! The kiss, is the formal handshake to the mind. Welcome back.
...Michael |
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