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Just A Kiss
by Rose L
Saturday, January 26, 2008
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Just a kiss

upon my lips

began the journey

volumes spoken

no words spilled

lip upon lip

tongue teasing tongue

breath warm and heavy

a fog from elsewhere

the promise implied

between the lips

begs to be explored

steal my breath

and heart with

just a kiss

nothing more.


(c) 2008 Rose Limongi



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Reviewed by Dark Knight
" just a kiss...nothing more..."0k if you say so...-well done
Reviewed by Regis Schilken
Love it! Gentle, sensual, nice imagery.

In my mind, that's the way a kiss should be--a kiss that leads to tender love making because one loves, not because one just becomes aroused. A kiss must come from the heart first before the tongue!

Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati
just a kiss

nothing more." What else is required!Kiss is the captain of the game of love!

Reviewed by Laura Mckenzie
Rose I enjoyed your description of a kiss great for the upcoming Valentines day! I loved the line "Steal my breath and heart with just a kiss" Lovely Kindly, Laura :)
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Amazing how a wonderful kiss speaks volumes. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Seldom is a mere kiss, just a kiss. They carry great responsibilty. Hearts can be broken, with just a kiss. Hearts can be mended, with just a kiss. Very well written poem .Jon Michael Willey
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
beautiful and sensual...
Reviewed by Dark Knight
whew I need a shower-very Hot!!
Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr
I see here your talent with the pen is only growing bigger and better writes.
Something simple as a kiss can be the start of so many meories but also can be used as a seal to lock and store them in you forever.

Tommy ~~&&**
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
The simplicity of this lovely piece of writing is its greatest strength. I enjoyed the author's dedication to the topic and inventiveness in expressing it to the reader. The flow is open and free, tumbling from beginning to end. The imagery is nearly palpable. I felt as though I were there. Great writing!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
But a kiss can be symbolic (beyond the physical) and it can mean so much. Nicely done, Rose. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
A kiss can do so much! Though I love your title (and your work), Rose, a kiss is never 'just'.
Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo
Loved this!!! The kiss, is the formal handshake to the mind. Welcome back.

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