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Lori
by Kevin S. Hart
Tuesday, January 24, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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This one was hard. It's personal, it needs some work, and needs critique to make it say what it has to say. Consider it a very rough first draft. i need to have it out there, though...


Lori,
Chord after chord the music wounds you
Quietly, you bleed with every beat and riff
Road trip tributes, romantic ballads
Written to recall
One night stands, twenty-something groupies,
What you thought were old, forgotten flames

Lori,
I wrote this song just for you
But no one would understand
Between now and forever after
A mother needs a lover, too

Lori,
Under bright lights, every stage remains unchanged
You make the all gigs that you can
You applaud; shout cheers, even if tears fall on the way
After all, when the lights go dark
There are bags to pack, bills to pay, small child at hand
Another night, another town, where’s your man?

Lori,
I wish they could hear my song
Maybe then, they all might comprehend
It’s a poem for a woman’s pain,
A heart tuned by guitar strings far too long.

Lori,
You prayed for a promise, married a dream,
Ended up as one more rider with the band
Somewhere around Lubbock, sharps became flats
All you were left with was,
“Hi, I’m the singer’s wife.”

Lori,
I’m sorry it took so long to write this down
But it’s hard to touch someone close to the flame.
You only know me as a gentle face in the dark.
I’ve held your arm, made you smile,
Listened to those problems no one wants to hear
While that damned crowd bought him another round…

Lori…
It’s OK you put your arm around me,
Squeezed back once, just a little
I’m sure someone, somewhere understands.



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Reviewed by Lori Garrison (Reader) 9/16/2006
It touches me in a way that most people will never know. I stumbled across your poem and I am so glad I did. To all the "Lori's" who have been there, we thank you.
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 1/25/2006
touching read
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/25/2006
Absolutely beautiful!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 1/25/2006
You are very emotional-charged and is evident in this poem. This poem is heartfelt and well-expressed of your love and pain. I think this is well-done.

Lucky Star Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by Aleja Bennett 1/24/2006
elt this and i would not change something that comes from the heart. There is nothing like expressions from the heart and impressions go no where. This is marvelous to me so with that said God bless.
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