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  Summer Moon
by andrea coltman
Friday, April 30, 2004
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Summer Moon

 

The full moon hid behind the night sky clouds

The cars screeched, the foxes howled

The moon reveals itself slowly

The slugs slithered mournfully

Head rested on an open palm

Mind wanting an inner calm

 

The full moon emitted an eerie light

The owls hoot and take flight

The moon hid behind drifting clouds

Bats fly silently; winds rustle leaves loud

Heart beats fast against self-will

Sweat drips slowly, causing chill

 

The full moon moves across the dawn summer sky

The snails retreat in their shells warm and dry

The moon looses against the dawn break

Humans still asleep, the birds awake

Eyes, tired, fight to become open

Pen poised to write a poem

 

Earwigs scuttle in circles all around

Red, velvet rose petal falls to the ground

A tired torso searches for bedclothes finally found

Lying on the floor, silently they fell, made no sound

Trees excrete the summer sap

Water drips from a garden tap

Leaving a pool of water to drain away

As dawn becomes a summers day

 

 

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Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader) 5/4/2004
Oooh, such winsome strokes here, Andrea. It reminds me of reading a summer tale, and all the more descriptive.
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 5/4/2004
Andrea,

"Mind wanting an inner calm..." Great line...beautiful picture...a most wonderful write - one that delights the palate of the mind!

Robert
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/4/2004
Most excellent Andrea!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 5/3/2004
Andrea great imagery in this...really lovely
writing..floria
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 5/2/2004
I sense inner turmoil in this piece, Andrea, as well as a hope of surcease from inner struggles. And, as MR comments, in the last line, a hope of a new day's dawning, or, in essence, a change. :) Wonderfully composed, floating a reader on a pink moon in a gorgeous purpled world, thereby scattering reason. Something I relate to.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 5/2/2004
What a wonderful image! The picture was excellent and so were your choice of words! Wonderful write indeed!

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/1/2004
You express the mood extremely well in these verses, Andrea. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 5/1/2004
Moon moves...snails retreat, this is a treat to read, had to read thrice to take in atmosphere, but was worth it..
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 4/30/2004
Beautiful all the way around.......
Reviewed by Dale Clark 4/30/2004
I can't wait for that Summer Moon. ;)
Great write!
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 4/30/2004
On this fortieth day of Spring I Salute You, Sublime Poet Andrea Hale.

"Summer Moon" strikes imagination.

I enjoyed the reading of a beautiful writing.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 4/30/2004
Andrea,
beautiful poetry and beautiful visual depth and expression in this one.
Love your art too perfection.
"Head rested on an open palm



Mind wanting an inner calm







The full moon emitted an eerie light



The owls hoot and take flight



The moon hid behind drifting clouds



Bats fly silently; winds rustle leaves loud



Heart beats fast against self-will



Sweat drips slowly, causing chill
"

Peg
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/30/2004
Mesmerizing write, Andrea - full of wonderful imagery. Enjoyed this very much.
Reviewed by Magnus Rater (Reader) 4/30/2004
Such depth - such hope as dawn becomes a summer's day! Well done - yet again!

The moon is still a light in the night! A matter of perspective and so very personal!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 4/30/2004
Andrea,
Love the beauty and imagery of your poem. Excellent flow and rhyme also.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 4/30/2004
WOW....great use of imagery in this poem!

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