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  Changing Winds
by andrea coltman
Friday, May 28, 2004
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Changing Winds


 

The wind cuts right through me

Piecing up life in a 3-D effect

Relentless, it pushes aside all that comes in its way

Having no doubts, no regrets

 

Merging hearts dissipate

Heartbeats increase in rate

People keep their distance

Trying hard to start resistance

 

Stitches try not to cross

The paths of parallel lines

Tread on earnestly

And you’ll find that life isn’t so fine

 

Howling winds surround me

Urging me on

I’m not completely blind to reality

At least, I thought so until now

 

Whirlwinds bring the truth

About what’s to come

They pick up everything

And then drop nothing

 

I hope you never change

But then people generally don’t

For you are my everything

And everything is more than I want

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 5/30/2004
Love the last line. Awesome picture, awesome write.........(0:
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 5/29/2004
We must stay tunned to the wind; sometimes the change is good. And as someone here already said: trust is what we need.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/29/2004
Beautiful write!
Reviewed by Magnus Rater (Reader) 5/29/2004
The sailor keeps their face to the wind and attempts to ride each storm knowing that the trusted crew stand alongside! Avanti!
Reviewed by Linda Hill 5/28/2004
Awesome write Andrea...
Loved this!

~Linda
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 5/28/2004
This is a stunning write. I love everything about this poem. Beautifully done.
Allen
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 5/28/2004
Lovely strong poem, love the final stanza, this is a real beaut..
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/28/2004
Very well written Andrea!!

Love The art!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 5/28/2004
Oh this is beautiful and the art exquisite......
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 5/28/2004
This is so well written, Andrea...I like the expression and flow...

Debashish

PS-->Piecing up life in a 3-D effect

>>>>>Piecing up life in 3-D < < <rhymes well with previous line!~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 5/28/2004
This is powerful Andrea. Well penned.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 5/28/2004
I loved this poem so much, absolutely beautiful poetry, really liked that last line,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/28/2004
Powerful piece, Andrea.

And that picture is Awesome!
Reviewed by Dale Clark 5/28/2004
'And everything is more than I want'
Wow! Heck of a line. Great poem!

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