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  Comparing Seasons
by andrea coltman
Monday, December 20, 2004
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Comparing Seasons

 

Autumn leaves falling, dancing, carried by the breeze

Twirling, circling, a last goodbye to the trees

Where do they finally lay to rest?

On the ground or do they go

Gently floating downstream via the river below?

 

Sink or swim? The Salmon clamber upstream

To their spawning ground

A place of life or death those

Precious fish have found

 

Against the ebbing tide, against the river flows

The salmon find a place through waters deep and shallow

With the tide, with the flow, the leaves tumble downstream out to sea

Far from the safety of that branch upon the tree

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was beautiful Andrea, very lovely,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
I am a winter baby, Andrea. But I will always love Autumn as my favorite. Nothing compares to those burning leaves. Except maybe a special woman's eyes. Merry Christmas to you.
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
This is so wonderful and so much said about the ways of life as we the leaves fall from the safety of the trees our lives go two ways one a struggle to the "top" the other just to get thru or sometimes down to go back up/regroup. This is so methodical. I love this poem and the picture, both are gorgeous.
The best of life's offerings for you and your family
Tracey
Reviewed by A PAX
excellent........so authentic..........
I love the changing of the seasons
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Superb imagery, Andrea and a captivating creation overall. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by jude forese
i like the tributaries of imagery ...
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Andrea,

Perfect!! Superb photo and write my friend - stunning work!!


Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Very philisophical Andrea, and beautifully thought! the pic is awesome just gorgeous! I love your mind pondering poem!;-)
Merry Christmas to you and yours! All the best in the years to come!
love, Eileen
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Beautiful nature write!
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
A very colorful and poetic write.
I wish autumn could stick around longer. Winter is one season I'd like to skip.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Well done Andrea!!

Thanks for the beautiful greetings!!

Merry Christmas right back at you....and a million thanks for you support!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Yup and you manage it, calmly, and expertly. No pity party. Sure do admire you...
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
A marvelous poem, Andrea. Sometimes when life unexpectedly sweeps us downstream, we have to gather our courage like the salmon and struggle to swim back upstream before we are swept away.

Wishing you and your family a Most Joyous Holiday Season.
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Andrea, Happy Holidays to you.
Yes everything has it's seasons, nature, people, animals, they tumble through the cycles without notice of change most of the time, encountering many different pathways.
Much like the salmon you speak of, sooner or later we'll all swim that final stream.
Awesome poetry Andrea.

Lisa
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
I love this one, Andrea. I like how you've used the Salmon as an example:

One has to learn to swim well in live in order to survive.

Wishing you a Wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
An enjoyable composition, "Comparing Seasons" delivers a page of knowledge, art and beauty.

healthy Holidays, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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