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2,6,4 Day
by andrea hale
Saturday, January 29, 2005
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2,6,4 Day



 


Sometimes a day feels OK


Sometimes my directions lead me the wrong way


I’ve got feelings inside


Feelings I just can’t hide


I’ve got a dream to pursue now


But I just don’t know how


 


I know what I want


And I reach out to grab it


It’s not that easy


But I’m going to have it


I won’t give up on my dream


Just ‘cos it’s my own scheme


 


Vacant faces, empty spaces


That’s the difference between you and me


You with your own life


Me with mine


That’s why we’ll never be


It’s not that I don’t like you


‘Cos I don’t


It’s not that I can’t


It’s because I won’t


 


And it’s been a 2,6,4 day


Everything goes its own special way


But I’m stuck on a platform


Watching the trains go thundering past


I scream but all sound is lost


And a train stops at last


 


© Andrea  Hale


 


 


 


Apologies for my absence…been back to hospital; my second home!!! Will catch up ASAP


 




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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 2/2/2005
Well done, Andrea. My best wishes to you to get well. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Robert Sheridan 2/1/2005
Andrea,

So glad you're back - haven't lost your masterful poetic touch ... shear excellence ...

Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 1/31/2005
wish and hope for better
for you
this poem rang true for alot here i'm sure
we all been to this place before
and you got the feelings down packed!!!
enjoyed
you take care
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/30/2005
Awwww well written hope you will be okay my friend!!

God Bless!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/29/2005
Very insightful write.
Reviewed by Nila Jamier 1/29/2005
I can so relate to this emotional piece of vacancy. Out standing expressions you have pened.:)
Nila
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/29/2005
If you gotta dream you gotta go for it.

Sorry to hear about hospital. Don't appologise. Just get and stay well.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/29/2005
A heartfelt poem, Andrea, and very glad to hear that you're out of the hospital. Hope you're feeling a lot better soon. And I do love that picture.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/29/2005
What a great poem, have missed you!
Andrea, I hope you are well soon?

love,eileen
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 1/29/2005
Sorry to hear you have been in the hospital but glad you are back.
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