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How many more fools?
by andrea hale
Monday, April 18, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.

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How many more fools?

And the hands on the clock start to roam

While he wishes he was back home

Oh the fool plays on in despair

To a room full of vacant chairs

Don’t play that song again

It brings memories of loss and pain

Don’t hurt yourself any more

Pick yourself up, off the floor

Remember, tomorrow is always there

As you sit brooding in your chair

But the fool plays on in despair

With no talent, style or flare

Oh the fool plays on in despair

To a room full of vacant chairs

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray	5/7/2005

Powerfully emotive and meaningful, Andrea. Well done. Thank you for sharing this poetic offering. Love and peace to you. Regis




Reviewed by C Hottran	4/23/2005

good write




Reviewed by jude forese	4/23/2005

excellent poem! luv the last couplet ...




Reviewed by Robert Sheridan	4/20/2005

Andrea, Power-packed emotional write ... fabulous, quite fabulous!! Blessings, Robert




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	4/18/2005

fantastic emotional write with a great message!




Reviewed by E T Waldron	4/18/2005

Andrea, this is outstanding! yes to Lady A "what a foo believes" she makes a good point!




Reviewed by A PAX	4/18/2005

but a fool believes............. remember that song??? well told Andrea :) pax A




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	4/18/2005

Excellent Andrea!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Dale Clark	4/18/2005

Yes it's true, there is definitely a time for change whether it's wanted or not. I was never a musician but I love music, so I can relate to that part of it but I guess a poem is a bit like a song? Brava Andrea!




Reviewed by Felix Perry	4/18/2005

This is fantastic Andrea, as a singer and guitar player myself (not a very good one) there are certian songs that when I play the teardrops always threaten and if I'm drinking sometimes do overflow and yet...I still have to play them. This poem is so right on. Felix

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