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Starstruck
by andrea hale
Thursday, May 19, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Star struck

You come over to my place

Clothes in a mess, unshaven face

How many times have I witnessed this scene?

I’m not being judgemental, not being mean

Star struck, wannabe

What’s the difference between you and me?

Star struck, wannabe

Full of hope and tragedy

But up on stage your body is next to heavenly

As your sensual voice hits all the right keys

Your audience is captivated, in awe

Your ego can remain rest assured

Star struck, wannabe

Living the dream, the fantasy

Star struck, wannabe

That’s the difference between you and me

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Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	5/26/2005

Intersting write God Bless Michelle!




Reviewed by Handsum Hart	5/25/2005

Interesting, depending on how you look at it, this can be good and bad. Peace




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	5/25/2005

This reminds me of all the stars wannabe's in the American Idol. Up on stage they're like completely another person. Good write Andrea! Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)




Reviewed by jude forese	5/20/2005

i'd rather be struck by stars ... poignant poem!




Reviewed by C Hottran	5/19/2005

Good write




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	5/19/2005

Well expressed !! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Paul Williams	5/19/2005

Excellent point well made Andrea, the world is full of wannabe's. The question is Why? are there lives so empty? Paul;-}




Reviewed by E T Waldron	5/19/2005

You made your point perfectly! Superb write Andrea!love the pic;-)! Love, Eileen




Reviewed by Dale Clark	5/19/2005

Isn't that the way, those wannabe's always trying to steal your thing. I never wanted to be famous just happy and some people want to rob you of that. Great write, Andrea!




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	5/19/2005

Quite an interesting post and perspective, Andrea.




Reviewed by Felix Perry	5/19/2005

Ah once again you capture your topic with grace and put the reader there beside you as you look at the subject of your poem and litterally dissect him and compare him to yourself, also forcing the readers to compare him to themselves. Nice work Andrea. Felix

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