|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|This is lovely, I think. What a mood! Thanks for posting it. Can't wait to read more. Cheers|
|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|Poignant and profound work. Great writing.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|YOUr talent rings in my ears Cendric!
With strong emotion!
This poem is much to be believed!
WArm hugs and Warmer love, Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Awesome. Great write and great talent. Excellent. Liz|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|How you can weave your words is spellbinding, love the humour, you could almost be mistaken for an Anglo, naa that's going too far, maybe an Oz..lol
Just loves your way with wordies....
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This is a fantastic write Cedric and captures so much emotion and feeling in a truly unique method. I love the way one line ends a verse to become another verses start. Well done
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|This piece is filled with such raw emotions that they are palpable...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I find this powerfully engaging and meaningful. Thank you for sharing this poetic masterpiece. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|There does come a day when a soul understands that all that was broken was just the shell He gave us for protection. Life begins then. Lady J|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Your pen conjures strong images like an artist painting a picture of life.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Wow. I am in the presence of a Master...exceptional, emotionally laden lines in free verse form. Well done, Cedric.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Deep. Excellent imageries and profound meanings|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|the same world that elated and enchanted me also left me broken
This thing we call 'life' truly does bring most of us, both joy and pain, and I hope your joyous moments will far outnumber the bad ones.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An excellent write Cedric
"If I were a carpenter
And you were a Lady
Would you marry me anyway"
Beautul lines immortalized
My the legendary "Bobby Darin"
Enjoyed your wonderful poetic piece
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|A stip of band-aid made of humor when lovingly ones remember a voice sounding like a tractor motor out of oil, but then, that shyness of a little hurt feeling when we didn't hear say, "...I was a lady..."
To be read a few times, and hold a pushing tear in.
|Reviewed by R Beeman
|well done. good raw emotional content with a relevant structure that can be related to.
|Reviewed by Jennave Coz
|Exquisite piece...Exceptionally done...You manage to capture heart and emotion completely.Thank You Very Much For Sharing. Jen|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|My Dad always told me I could never draw or sketch
anything, but he would show me his sketch doodles
which he thought were great which they were not.
i surely didn't argue with him unless I wanted
a busted lip or head.
Enjoyed your write...
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|...would you call me baby...
I recall the song and the question then touched my young mind. A carpenter, a lady and then....Jesus and Mary. There were so many ways to go with the song then...now...you give us more chapters. I like your style.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Exceptional poetry Cedric!... your brilliant pen conjures up such rich imagery, making it a sumptuous read....Thank you
|Reviewed by blue soplain
|egads.. .the spiritual allegory, the immaculate imagery ...jsut exquisite and ephemereal. .. the tone, the evocativeness of each nuance and threadbare wanton feeling. .. this may be one of the most illuminous and divine things i have read.. .. wow...in a long time.. .you are an astounding poet/thinker
just gorgeous and sensuous and profound....