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heart and sole
by Cedric III
Thursday, August 09, 2007
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he's a corner folder
i like that about him
conscientious about keeping his place
(always making sure i know mine:
[his] gravity has this uncanny knack
of finding my heart
(like chewed gum)
in his sole)
he's beautiful
it's not his fault
he cant remember his number
(and i know mine is up)




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Reviewed by Ted Bossis 8/15/2007
You see the beauty in everything{My guess} ----All good love <>TedSo
Reviewed by Emily Tarantino 8/14/2007
hmmmm. A corner folder?
I know some one with a gravity like that.
wonderful imagery in such a small space!
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 8/10/2007
He's a corner folder, I am too!
CAn't help it, forced habit!
Love your heart!
STAy Positive!
WArm hugs and Warmer Love, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeeoox
Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. 8/10/2007
Awesome imagery Cedric...."chewed gum"....... Deep and poignant.......well crafted.....A beautiful poem indeed.


Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/10/2007
So much packed in so few lines: I love it, Cedric. Nothing ambiguous here: well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Leo Durrant 8/10/2007
I love the opposing views of these lines:
"conscientious about keeping his place
always making sure i know mine"
It's a sad fact that when people are in this sort of relationship, they always seem to make excuses for the people that are using them. You show that well here -- even down to not capitalizing "I".
Very powerful.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/10/2007
he's a corner folder
i like that about him

And I like your depiction of him.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 8/10/2007
A poem of few words and many feelings, takes us from the tender unblinking eyes of a small deer looking into the oncoming headlights, to the despondency of finding her heart like a piece of gum under someone's shoe.
But, this is very actual, because, in a society of use and throw away, love is not more a feeling but a commodity.
Which that heart needs nurturing, caring and not more lies go without saying.
Well done.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 8/9/2007
Do I feel a hint of insecurity on your part? There are men who can make you feel like that. You have created a great mysterious character. Victor
Reviewed by George Carroll 8/9/2007
Add a little mystery for the reader to ponder.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 8/9/2007
LOL, fantastic ending. Narative is perfection...
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) 8/9/2007
Different sides here, I got lost in it's meaning but it started to mean something. Lady J
Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels 8/9/2007
This was a nice work! Keep poetry alive!!!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/9/2007
Maybe, or perhaps you are reading him wrong and his folded corners are really his continued protest against the library police of another day, hearts and souls are always slighty uncontrollable and sounds like this write captures some of that...

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