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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
8/25/2007 |
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Fantastic! Nothing more needs to be said except that I'd love to have you as a member of my website. You'll find a link on my pages.
BTW Dancing with Chameleons is the tentative title of my upcoming book of love poetry. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
8/18/2007 |
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| Profound and well crafted. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/18/2007 |
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Well writ!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
8/16/2007 |
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What you see is not always what you get. Well done!
Thanks,
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
8/16/2007 |
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very accomplished poem, cedric.
... you, smiling your confident ancestral smile
and me trying not to give the silence words...
You seem like a true lover of poetry to me! warm regards kenny
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/15/2007 |
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A very unique ability to twist and manipulate words to frame the picture at hand. Fantastic.....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Johnny Smith |
8/15/2007 |
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| Nicely written. Thank you for making my night. |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
8/15/2007 |
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| Is it not the chemistry of both that changes us. Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/15/2007 |
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This is indeed substance for thought, Cedric. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/15/2007 |
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As an actor myself I can almost feel you on the stage enuciating your lines in a dramatic sweep of your hands towards the audience. I like it.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
8/15/2007 |
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A gem of a thought process. This poem is quite inviolable in its spiritual undertones me thinks. I'll pass on the performance in only underware though. Sorta reminded me of the Red Hot Chili Peppers some years back, when they performed naked with only a sock over the jewels. YIKES!
Blessings ...
Richard the seeker of semi-precious gems ... |
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| Reviewed by Jennave Coz |
8/15/2007 |
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| Bravo !!! Bravo!!! I love you as a poet and a human.Jen |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/15/2007 |
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I love Ginsberg's poetry, and I love the honesty in this open write: a changeling, you are! Can picture you on stage reading this. What an intriguing image: well done, Cedric.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
8/15/2007 |
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| A great modern poem. I read a bit about Ginsberg since I have not much knowledge about US poets. Quite contraversial. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
8/15/2007 |
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Hope they're clean undies!!!!
Simplicity in appearance, but unique poetry in essence...
Blimey Miss, your poetry is outstanding...
If I didn't know better I'd kinda think you n KB were the same person, but 10 000 miles kinda proves that theory wrong..lol
BTW any pics of the recital..lol |
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| Reviewed by blue soplain |
8/15/2007 |
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stunning conclusion and the subtle play of parentheticals :} must say my favourite line is "pure in their longing to be....pure with[out] dirty hands" egads, the hiddens.ness of what we do trying to put it behind our backs so that no one else recognizes/sees the 'us' of relity. .. ..and its such an honest camouflage, never inteding to hurt, just protect [sometimes even others besides ourselves] such an artist youa re. ..
love the line breaks----
indeed~
ness |
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| Reviewed by Missy Cross |
8/15/2007 |
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| Cedric, another literary gem... a linguistic adventure of the most intimate proportions. you are simply amazing. |
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| Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader) |
8/15/2007 |
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| I once got to see Ginsberg in Sand Francisco reading naked to an audience. What a treat! :o) --Robert |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/15/2007 |
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tonight i am Ginsberg
reciting poetry on stage
in my underwear
And you've done it very well - Bravo! |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
8/15/2007 |
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Enjoyed this unique presentation and your play on words along with the arrangement. Cedric~simply wonderful!
Blessings to you and your work,
From the Heart...
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
8/15/2007 |
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Where there is true love there is truth, no time for dirty hands. a beautiful write, thank you for sharing.
Rose |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
8/15/2007 |
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| What direction{yes}-love TedsO |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
8/15/2007 |
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Sorry if I can't read this poem in my underwear, but will be looking around to see if I can spot that little chameleon with little clothing on. Broken promises are like broken arrows, useless, and to the exclusivity of Romeo and Juliet I will counter...kiss a frog, cross your fingers and see what happen.
Lovers and Chameleons, aren't they the same thing?
Georg |
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