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Cedric III

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slow motion
by Cedric III

Saturday, September 01, 2007
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and i used
"i feel..."
lines as if itemized and categorized
you would listen
yet my words remain,
unclaimed baggage
on airport carousels

you asked for
walls that i may be
your museum-
a ton of bricks on a leash

like the way time slows
or stops
in crisis
[or math exams]
yes...
this is falling in
slow [e]motion


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Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader) 1/28/2008
The imagery in this piece is evocative and rich and the flow contributes to the effective approach to the topic. Nicely crafted work that pulls in the reader and creates a potent picture to experience.
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/13/2007
Admired but never praised are empty of emotion.
Reviewed by Cathy Delaleu 9/22/2007
I enjoyed reading this...I felt your words
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 9/2/2007
Hard hitting write. I like the maths bit..
everything anessa has said is right on the money...
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 9/2/2007
Your words will seems to be lake unclaimed baggage, but...258 reviews said that they are not taken with the wind of indifference.
Like Pink Floyd said...another brick on the wall!
Georg
Reviewed by blue soplain 9/1/2007
how you transcended and linked together the mundacity of ordinary things with the overused trite poeticness of what we try and create; the pedestrian 'i feel......' lines. ..such a clever one you are~ you made the words themselves slow. . .warp...a tesseract of vocabulary and images that are beyond what we perceive them as;
i get so flustered trying to pinpoint your exact notions/symbols/meanings b/c when i read your work, it seems as if theya re everywhere and so slightly lit up so that only the REAl reader [not the common ordinary one] can even attempt to decipher them; they are thinktanks of dreams, encyclopedias of beauty and gracefulness. . . such envy i have
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
this is such a analytical precision write that makes one STOP
wow
ness
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 9/1/2007
You have painted a lovely picture through your words, though your heart seems torn, great write.....

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Aberjhani 9/1/2007
A very fine precision of imagery, emotion, and tonal voice that adds up to one powerful poem.

Aberjhani
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 9/1/2007
Lady J~ I love the depth in which you write!
This is exceptional BEAUTY and much said in each line, with a hint of sadness!
Thank you for sharing with an OPEN heart! and Soul!
Warmly, Warrior SheCat Purrs....

STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Reviewed by Missy Cross 9/1/2007
O Cedric, you have outdone yourself here. I hope you don't mind if I save this, you've concocted so many images here that I just want to snack on again and again. Sorry I can't be more articulate than WOW.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/1/2007
J this is excellant work, I can feel your frustration and your pain and the images you conjured with the use of "I feel" line as well as the time example were great.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/1/2007
Cedric,

Excellent. You pack much in small packages. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Art Sun 9/1/2007
Nice work on your expression of slow motion...even the depth of relationships can make things seem this way...


nice work...




Art Sun...
Reviewed by Chuck Keller 9/1/2007
Thought provoking. Nice work.
Reviewed by Ted Bossis 9/1/2007
Unexpected course taken -When least expected {Emotions abound} -All love good ^Ted^
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