AuthorsDen.com   Join Free! | Login  

     Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Scott Boyd, iMargaret Hardisty, iBrad Bathgate, iClaire Power Murphy, HonDL, iS Zachary, iNancy Jardine, iJoe Bueno, i

  Home > Memoir > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Cedric III

· Become a Fan
· Contact me
· Poetry
· 23 Titles
· 358 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Dec, 2003

Cedric III, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.


Popular Poetry (Memoir)
  1.  The Glance - 1944
  2.  Closure
  3.  JDs Rose - Nicole
  4.  The Dark Place
  5.  Ten Pillars Strong ...
  6.  He was but Four...
  7.  My First Grand...
  8.  Wanderer
  9.  My red hot sexy baby...
  10.  I'M STILL HERE
  11.  I Love My Dog
  12.  Day Dreaming In The Snow
  13.  Sometimes It Hits Me Like That
  14.  On a Balcony in Rome
  15.  The Cottage
  16.  Email for My Sweet Love
  17.  No Half Numbers
  18.  Marshland channels known by heart...
  19.  Snowy Morning Walk
  20.  My True Confession



untitled # 47
by Cedric III
Wednesday, November 21, 2007
Not rated by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Become a Fan

Recent poems by Cedric III
•  to engineer fate:
•  disclaimer:
•  a diminuendo of love
•  bodies for breaking
•  this is [not] home
           >> View all 23

i think it odd
the way we divide ourselves
as if refusing to be whole
is progressive
     but pease do not misunderstand:
     when i said "i love you"
     i wasn't offering anything

alcohol makes us family
washing over failed marriages
until home is nothing more
than a preposition
     we all have reason to
     forget we cannot fly

i wasn't offering anything-
my parachute is too blue to save me
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by jude forese 11/25/2007
it seems the only option is a soft landing ... hope you find your target ...
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/23/2007
Well expressed....welcome back.....happy you landed safe back on AD :)!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 11/22/2007
Welcome back Cedric the Third, never mind your parachute, mine is big enough for both of us...hang on.
Georg
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 11/21/2007
Reasons are many, but facing the truth is always better for all concerned.....

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by blue soplain 11/21/2007
concur with Richard; great to read of you again. ..
this is so intimate and real; vivid and visceral. .. a soft serenade of surrender, and not in the beauetiful kind, but the near hopeless sort that renders you powerless; and YOU can never be that. ..
a too surreal dreamworld. ..
powerful indeed
ness
Reviewed by Felix Perry 11/21/2007
yes when marraiges or even relationships with any kind of love fall apart someone has to pay the price...when children are involved they usually pay the highest but sometimes the price the children pay for them staying together is even greater....Good write Cedric...been a while, I have missed you.

fee
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) 11/21/2007
I remember those days. Lady J
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 11/21/2007
well done
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 11/21/2007
I could feel myself rising with each word, like the exhaust from a hot air balloon, pushing me toward the blue, in your skies!
Entrapping!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 11/21/2007
A lot of pure, simple angst is laced throughout this one, my friend . . . Blue is the word . . .
Reviewed by Charlie 11/21/2007
And I don't need a parachute, because poems like this are a trampoline that makes me feel like I'm soaring--but in reality, I'm just falling upward towards the blue, blue parachute of your sky.
Your lines are exquisite, even in your pain. I hope this net of poetry we weave really does fling you back up into the sky.
You were a gift to me from someone's opened "treasure chest of authors"--It is a gift I enjoy! --Charlie
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/21/2007
Powerfully moving and meaningful, Cedric. Love and blessings to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/21/2007
Oh, Cedric,

This is powerful...especially

"...alcohol makes us family
washing over failed marriages
until home is nothing more
than a preposition...." WOW

Deep pain in these lines, alone.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by richard cederberg 11/21/2007
Deeply personal and starkly realistic. There is a distinct aroma in this write that describes well someones wounded heart consigned to being emotionally withdrawn. Good to read you again!
Thanksgiving blessings ...
Richard
Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.