|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|You describe the haunting in a gripping way...in the light of the terror in that Russian school, this strong message is even more apropos
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Sweetie, I am praying for you. I miss our chats. Hang in there.
Love, JC xoxoxo
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|scary stuff....guess why it was named "Night Terrors"
sounds like the begining of a story to me
|Reviewed by Karen Cino
|Wow. You have written an extrememly emotional and deep piece. The WTC horror will always be encrypted in everyone's soul, especially us New Yorkers that lived through the horror of not knowing if our loved ones where alive. You brought tears to my eyes. Excellent job.
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|What a powerfully vivid in imagery and emotion piece!!!!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
*shudders* what a horrible dream...what a horrible event...that never goes away
and i as well remember...and will never forget. :( i'm sorry for your loss
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Interesting write, caught my eye as I watched a documentary recently on how kids suffer night terrors, though I know your write is describing something far more than that.
Well done Ty
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|We shall all have night terrors for quite awhile. None of us will ever forget. Thanks for sharing this.|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Hello, Ron. :) Was reading some of my older poetry last night and saw your name, was wondering what you've been up to.
The feeling I got from your piece created an almost nauseating sense of loss. That feeling most of have, now, since our innocence was butchered. It can be managed when life has to be lived, but dances with feverish continuity at all levels. At times, it overwhelms. And the ache is incredible, vicious and sad. The anniversary nears, the sound of jets will always produce an inner flinch. Sharing the pain helps, thank you for reminding me we, as indivuals in mourning, are not alone.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Powerful emotion and well-expressed feelings.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|Evil flourishes everywhere, and all any of us can do it oppose it in our own way. Vietnam showed the world that we are not invincible, just as Afghanistan did for the Russians. After that, everything else became inevitable. I hope that we have learned something from all this, but I have my doubts.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very powerful write Ron!!
Scary but good!!
|Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione
|This is damn good. Nightmares are a big theme with my writing as well.|
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|a powerful write.
But do not forget
the enemy lies within,
as well as without...