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Just a little experimentation ... really.
I have chanted ancient syllables
And lifted the dust of ages,
From the tomb of unknowing
Where the dark ones dwell
Faces of darkness and gloom
Now loosed upon the world
Like a mythic tide, cursing
Inundating a chaotic shore
Inside abyssmal caverns
Where creatures of the night
Delude the world, crushing
The land with unspeakable terror!
Leviathan has reared his head!
The Apocalyptic seals are broken
Fire bursts from a darkening sky
The serpent awakens
His radiant motions stir
The bowels of the earth
Volcanoes erupt as people flee
Into the crumbling labyrinths of time
Where beasts more vicious
Than time's forgotten reaper
Await them with open jaws
And teeth of knives
And tongues of fire and thunder
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|Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
|I love it when a poem sends chills You do it so darn well!|
|Reviewed by Sherri Emily Avery
It's been a long time since I've seen you, I'm glad to see you again. Lovestories is where we use to meet. Anyway, I love this poem, great read and write for a experiment. Keep up the great work as always...Keep the faith....Sherri Emily, President of Love Poetry Cafe www.lovepoetrycafe.com
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Reviewed by Misty Lackey
|I am glad I found you, Love this, great!
please read my poetry.
|Reviewed by Dallas Franklin
|Very visual and wonderful capture of other senses as well..I sure don't wanna go there tho! *~;)Excellent expression.*S*S|
|Reviewed by Darlene Zagata
|I loved it!|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Quite an experiment. My 'dark' side made me enjoy this. JC|