|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Immaginatively creative and well written overall. Thank you for sharing this offering of your brother's, Michelle. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very nice imagery and flow ... i would replace "W/out" with the actual word ... otherwise, a very creative piece ...|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|My, my, MIchelle, this is obviously a artistic family. "cold water exhaling angst" is a line I read and reread 3 times, nodding my head, wishing I could claim it (smile) Eric, the idea of loving 'without scorecards is an idea I've not see expressed in verse, and is one of many expressions in your poem that proves you have a unique voice... time to get a computer, join AD, or, make a deal with Michelle to share hers! Good stuff! katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|very interesting and filled with
bright imagery, creative imagery
tell good job
and keep writing!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most excellent Eric...you've got it...keep that pen flowing....you good...very good!!
|Reviewed by M. B.
|OMG! His imagination is dynamic. The imagery evoked is compelling. I can see he is experimenting with contrasting and conflicting moods and emotions that form intriguing connections. I like that.
He's cool. ;)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Bravo!Eric get a computer and work on a book!
Michelle be proud!;-)
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|It is interesting his point about the lilly because I have thought the same thing. Interesting poem here and I am glad you posted it.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Eric is taking after you, sis :) I see talent runs in the family, eh?
Having no computer hasn't stopped me, Eric--go to your local library if you have one and get on the Internet there--that's what I do. :)
Keep writing, and living your dreams.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|beautiful write, michelle! very nice!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Yuppers, love unconditional.
Hmm, War of the roses. Sure changed our history..lol
Never thought of lillies that way, but come to think of it.....Guess bee's ain't stupid then..