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Scars in Fire
by Jane Rodway

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This was inspired by a T.V. News report of a fire. It brought back memories of the one we had when I was a child.

Pretty pictures curled
and
hidden windowsills-

Is that my bedroom curtains
turning as grey
as the smoke that
billows from the
fire's breath?

You are scorching
the place
where my safety lived-

So that now,
I will never feel safe again-

So that now,
I will cling to the things
that matter-

Family and a place
out of the cold,
the deathly kiss
of icy lips
tickling only
windowpanes-

I cry because
my life is a
smoke-filled hole.

I cry because
my life is a
room with black walls.

I cry because
I have been exposed
to the fury of nature.



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Reviewed by Gary Gebert 1/22/2004
Nice work. Though not a good experience, you have brought it out and shared it in beautiful words. Thanks.

Gary
Reviewed by Trixie Love 1/20/2004
Powerful write, Michelle.


Excellent!!!


Trixie :)
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 1/20/2004
Yes. It is an inbuilt trait that all creatures fear fire...even the ones who think they can control it !!
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 1/18/2004
BRILLIANT work!
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 1/18/2004
Visuals are powerful in these verses excellent.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/18/2004
Very well written Michelle!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese 1/18/2004
the fury of nature can isolate us as well as inspire us to write a very powerful poem ...
Reviewed by anne cunningham 1/18/2004
i have a special, scarred and kindred place for this one ... as basho would say, how better we can see the moon. -a
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/18/2004
This is enough to make any child feel insecure, fire a good slave but bad master, 75% of fires are caused by leaving electical appliances plugged in or on, very well expressed..

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