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|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|what a beautiful, beautiful tribute. i'm sure her spirit lives on in the words you and others write.|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Just a single footfall of my time
To be released to the wind,
And remembered for the gentle
Brush of her feathers against my tears. <---Very emotive and beautifully written......she sounds special....a lovely tribute...
I should have such a friend to write something like this for me when I am gone...
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Jeanne... you have me crying, shivering and aching. This is so searingly beautiful to me. Even the words in your title bring ... a saturation of sadness. Jenn...
The monsoon is almost over, here, Jeanne. Clouds always comforted me, I saw Jenn flying. Clear skies make me... still. I don't like that. I want to be turbulent, like Jenn, but not. Hers was sorrow, mine is thanksgiving, and passing on what she bestowed to me, herself. Passing on all of you... As we pass on.
Love you, Jeanne, you make me feel more whole, Jenn never did, feel whole, no matter how much we tried to help her see her beauty, she could not be whole. We can. For Jenn.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is a stunning tribute and shows your heart and soul is filled with great love. Thank you for such a beautiful sharing.|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
A wonderful tribute to your special friend -Ravyn.
Very touching write.