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Perhaps the sun was jealous . . .
by jeanne rene watson
Sunday, January 16, 2005
Rated "R" by the Author.
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Perhaps the sun was jealous . . .
I crawl over you like a cat with a deadly appetite, hunched over bright white linens, laughing. I feel the warm shower of sun come through the open window and press against my back, and sense the path of a sweat bead travel down my vertebra. I let it slip slowly onto my fingertip. Your eyes open at my absence, and I move further as you reach for me, your hand sliding off my stomach. The tease turns the corners of your mouth, curiously.
You lay like a beautiful god, all muscle and sinew exposed, your prowess in a precarious sleep. I’ve always loved your sleepy head deep inside the pillow, surrounded by soft satisfaction, dreaming. I only wanted to peek at your beauty. The smile disturbs our interlude. An impression of your body lingers on the sheet, as you rise and draw me in, falling once more down to lips, consumed in a kiss too delicious, and lost again in the swell of your desire, intoxicated.
jeanne rené 1/05
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| Reviewed by John Mayer |
4/3/2005 |
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| Been there, done that. Everyone should be this passionate. Poetic erotica at its best. |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
1/19/2005 |
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| Words of fire Jeanne |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
1/17/2005 |
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| very nice, sexily written |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/17/2005 |
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metaphoric eroticism at its best! Superb poem!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
1/17/2005 |
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| A very romantic and erotic write here. |
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