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moth wing
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jeanne rene watson
Friday, July 08, 2005
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moth wing
I am as the dust on moth wing,
releasing
upon a moments outburst
my muted pigmentations.
Blue of swift faith,
orange-brown penetrations of desire,
abiding season of green,
powders
of cyclic metamorphosis
in tawny and ivory tones,
shed from membranes in frantic flight.
I flutter,
my resting-place tenuous
on life's capricious threads
spun in temporal looms,
but weighted by thickness of body
I remain
never barren.
Never remiss of direction
I absolve
all remorse
sip the nectar
of immutable destiny,
approaching from within the obscurity
to fly into the light,
dream iridescence
as this dust scatters from my moth feather,
its minuscule mark
settling on landscapes tomorrow foreseen.
jeanne rene 5/05
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
2/9/2008 |
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Jeanne, I love your poetry. The precision of your words is simply wonderful.
("A woman's notebook" is an absolute favorite, one of the best poems I've read on this site)
"my resting-place tenuous
on life's capricious threads"
really beautiful!
Axilea
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| Reviewed by d. krusky |
7/28/2007 |
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I enjoyed this write. A very amusing use with words. It's amazing what can transpire into a poem, song, story or book if one's mind is open to it. Your mind was definitely open to the imaginings of this piece.
Smiles,
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| Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. |
2/24/2007 |
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"powders
of cyclic metamorphosis
in tawny and ivory tones,
shed from membranes in frantic flight."
Lyrical, sonorous, and so observant.......I enjoyed this very much Jeanne.....
Bill
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/4/2007 |
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A poem worthy of much more than a single reading. Thank you for sharing your talent, Jeanne. Love and peace,
Regis |
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