|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|It seems that you have chosen the right source of inspiration. This poem is made of wonderful sounds, textures, colors and a slowly enchanting atmosphere.
And I love these two lines:
"let me be the beat of the rolled newspaper
slapping your palm"
Well crafted piece that I read with real pleasure.
All the best,
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Inspiration can find one as the thread that is within the sands and when it journeys along the trails of the mind it becomes as these thoughts placed within your poem...
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Sounds to me: By my favorite Author Kahlil Gabran' ( I own 6 of his Works of Art-Books )
This Awesome write is just
Hypmotizing! I love this!
Great metaphors too!
Warmest Blessings and HuGs,WArrior Sheeeooxx
- I started following/watching/tracking you as of today-
Whenever you can- Stop by my corner of the den and see in your heart is touched soothingly in some awe-inspiring way~
|Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly
|Captivating and enchanting words and wisdom. Awesome and inspiring prose. Wonderful tribute to your inspiration. Thanks so much for sharing your gift. My best, Gloria|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Your mastery of words is made evident via your verses, Jeanne. Je ne murmure pas, je le dis tout haut. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Stark but lush imagery in this gorgeous poem jeanne rene.
"let me be the forgotten thread
torn form the hem of your shirt"
Such an exquisite image here. I enjoyed this immensely! Never rest your quill Poet.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|Excellent poem, Jeanne Rene. How well you've described reading a particular poet's work, and having a mind-meld, a merging of souls if you will, with a poem or a poet merely through their written words. I think most writers can identify with that. Can you fall in love through poetry? It's up for discussion, but I believe you can ... Excellent poem.
|Reviewed by Anna M
|There is some gorgeous and unusual imagery in this poem. I liked it's subtle yet passionate voice alot.|