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Love Song for September
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jeanne rene watson
Wednesday, September 05, 2007
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September sits upon the gates,
holding hostage summer’s still, sultry shadow
under arms of evergreens, and lazy old dogs
who have forgotten how to bark at strangers
She waits with wayward affection outside our fences,
puffing little whispers through knot holes
and stirring the hues of dreamy deciduous,
awakening the brilliance of autumn’s brush
And so ….
September winks at me,
As I sit beneath umbrella’s shade.
I hear her impatient rustle rush up against the window pane
and watch her toe-tapping in little gusts across the dust.
She teases with the sweet scent of rain
old dog and I, languishing in lazy inhalations,
as we keep company in weary expectation.
Leaving only the thought of her cool fingertip
pressed against my lips,
she perches once again on the season’s threshold
and recites her calendar, in voice welcomed by me.
“September!” I call. “Let summer slip between
your days. Come kiss me with wilted rose petals.
Love me ‘neath a blanket of yellowing leaves.”
jeanne rené 08.07
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
9/27/2007 |
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There is a touch of love beneath the surface of thoughts, a love for summer and the ensueing love of fall, riding in on the winds of September....a very nice view of this change of seasons...
nice.....
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Leo Durrant |
9/9/2007 |
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It's the call of autumn that moves me as well.
"puffing little whispers through knot holes"
"and watch her toe-tapping in little gusts across the dust."
Such vivid pictures. Perfect feeling to match a perfect autumn day.
Very well done.
Leo |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
9/9/2007 |
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Enjoiyed the personifications and imageries presented.
Ahhh "Love Song for September" gave beautiful thoughts and colors~thank you!
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
9/7/2007 |
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Delightful ... smooth and flowing and satisfying. Like a bowel of sweet berries and cream. Blessings Poetess ...
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/6/2007 |
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Superb personification of my favorite season, Jeanne René. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/6/2007 |
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A wonderful blend between photograph and written expression to lead the days into the arms of the fall....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
9/6/2007 |
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| A real relaxing day watching the summer day cascade into the slowly changing blotches of fall colors. enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by chris stienstra |
9/5/2007 |
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One of the most remarkable works I have read about the coming change. This work had me sitting there with you and the ole dog, (although I probably would have given him a biscuit and barked at strangers for him). Thank you for this journey of words.
My best regards,
Chris |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/5/2007 |
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What a ovely ode to September. Seems like all we remember is the darkness of one September day, and forget the beauty surrounding us. Thank you for the reminder: excellent.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
9/5/2007 |
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| How lovely. I read it three times and enjoyed it more each time. The last stanza ends it perfectly. Yet, it's a poem you don't want to end. You're a great poet jeanne rene and I'll be reading more. |
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