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Unmerciful, Because We Loved
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jeanne rene watson
Wednesday, September 26, 2007
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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A little scar cuts across her upper lip, Cupid’s Bow interrupted,
the thought sometimes slipped into my mind, a phrase to write
a poem upon, as I fixated midway through
conversations on front lawns of days
and ways of memory, and futures still within our reach.
Our woman songs undulating, in accents usual or syncopated,
we rung our hands of worry,
lifted our bosoms heavy with motherhood
and strutted round bottoms for all to envy.
Jingling our bangles, bobbles to rhythm of chatter
on breezy porch doorsteps,
driveways reaching over the distance of our sisterhood
with a quick and neighborly wave.
How’s the kids? How’s the kids? How’s the kids . . .
We aged on our front lawns,
standing ankle deep in plastic swimming pools,
the winds slapping our cheeks raw with yesterday’s promises,
and we braced ourselves for the unmerciful, because we loved
…the kids
All these years we’ve loved the kids
and nothing else has really mattered.
And all these years
Her meztizo contour has held its bold and rich design,
a beauty maturing within its own smooth dark skin.
She and I have moved our hips with slow, slide-to-slide satisfaction,
the phantom impression of side slung babes forever seen in our nakedness.
September afternoon,
She bites the scar across her lip. Lip quivering,
unprotected by all her love.
My hands could only cup her face
to hold this treasure of living life just as life is
. . . so unexpected
My baby
A mother
cries
My
baby
Her tears,
weigh my palms with insatiable sorrow
jeanne rené 09.07
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
2/14/2008 |
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I LOVE the last two stanzas! I can hear the cries haunting me. This is just... beautiful doesn't quite describe it, but awe-inspiring maybe. So much to digest from this poem and to try to contain the pain.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
12/2/2007 |
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Magnificent poetry Jeanne, once again I feel the intensity of your unique, very personal imagery. I love the details that come adding sudden realism in your poetic wor(l)ds. Until the changes of rhythm and revelation of emotions at the end.
I really loved it.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
11/17/2007 |
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| Stunned! Talk about being able to disappear in to the words! So many good word-combos here: "front lawns of days"; "we aged on our front lawns"; "September afternoon" ... and I bawled at the end, and I don't even cry at funerals, but I revisited painful ones here, in yours... what a gift!--so glad I stumbled into you. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/27/2007 |
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This truely is so beautiful! A mother's love through time and changes is always a mother's love. The giving of life and sacrifice....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/27/2007 |
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This is fine poetry indeed, Jeanne; compelling and moving. It is worthy of much more than a single reading. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/27/2007 |
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| Wow! For a guy reading this I felt my own bosoms heavy with motherhood . . . How's THAT for understanding this poem of feminine mysticism on parade, which isn't really misticism at all, it is merely our DNA, plus a good bit of our ancestery . . . Gotta love it . . . This was good . . . |
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