|Reviewed by John Leko
|...many colors here...sides to be read...and swatted characters...with scent of Channel and peanuts...make this a damn good piece.
excellent imagery jeanne...
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Love how your words captured
Such beautiful imagery and vividness!!
Love Peace and hugsss....Morning Star
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|Loved the images you wrote here-made me think I was actually there|
|Reviewed by Norris Williams
|I like the image of 'low-watt dreams'. Good metaphor. An enjoyable narrative poem.|
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Holy, Holy Cow! What a story, and how you tell it.... awesome! --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Excellent writing skills that make the reader drink until the last drop, read until the last word.
|Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
|I was a fly in some of those bars, swatted at often, flying to bigger and better glasses|
|Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
|This is VIVID!
I enjoyed this brilliantly portrayed picture of the down side.
Eye catching title!