|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Yes, add the music please! Brilliant work!!
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Greatly enjoyed my dear!!!!!!!Love Holly|
|Reviewed by Bella Christopher (Reader)
|YES!!!! I needed to read this more than I can express. Emancipating oneself from a selfish union is like coming
alive again after a very long coma. Bravo to you for
writing it so perfectly!!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Put it to music...and you have a winner again.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|cool poeming Pier, I feel you in this one. Peace&love G|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
When one synchronizes wonders one finds the tools to complete the
tasks of life and drink the nectar of bliss.
"Watch Me Now" leads to the fountain of accomplishment of the soul,
and sings with the voice of love.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya email@example.com
|Thanks so much for an early new year's message. It's worth memorizing for those times when I ask myself "How much is too much?" (tolerance, that is.) (smile)
blessin's Sis Pier,
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Yeah this is it
take charge and see
William .....Peace & love
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Such powerful expression and self-assertion! Go for it, Pier! Love and peace to you!
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara
|Lets not talk about a bad hair day, geez I have a bad hair lifetime!;O) LOL Way to go, get em!
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Way to go, girl
love and peace
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Pier, I love it!;-)!! Great expression and way to go!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|keep smiling, Pier ;)|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Wonderful feelings are expressed in your verses, Pier. There comes a time when we realize that, though we love someone, we must start living life for ourselves or face the sadness of never reaching our dreams. I have always wondered why too many relationships are so limiting that the dreams of two can't meld, so that all the dreams can be shared by both. Sadly, it is rarely the case, but neither should ever let go of the persuit of their own dreams and their own happiness even if they have to realize them alone.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Well written Pier!!
you go girl!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I get it my way everytime I go to BurgerKing...show me what you can do, I am waiting to see, I just hope its for free...;) Ed|
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|This reminds me of the pure happiness children feel. It would be wonderful to feel that way again. Good write.|
|Reviewed by June Thompson
|AMEN!!! Watching, Waiting,... Grow! Grow!|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Yup! Watch you now. Good write, Pier!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)