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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/27/2009 |
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Lovely. Your expression of Spring is perfect.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Darryn Murphy |
4/21/2009 |
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| great poem |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
11/16/2008 |
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| Beautiful verses by a beautiful author. Makes me want springtime to come to see that cherry tree outside my window blossum again and the birds sing their love songs again. Have to get through winter first though. Good write. |
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| Reviewed by Vickie Yannuzzi |
9/10/2008 |
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| I love cherries,after reading the poem, like many of us we do not see our beauty, but then, something happens, and we blossom into God's gift of splendor, great to see this view. |
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| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen |
8/18/2008 |
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Impressed, not so much with this piece
But the words, style and scent...
Pretty pen
Sincerely..
Rodney |
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| Reviewed by Joanna Leone |
6/19/2008 |
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You have written in such a way that I was able to see the rose petals, and smell them. This is a beautiful poem, and I love the imagery.
Stop by my den when you have a chance. I am new to this site. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
1/4/2008 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
5/13/2006 |
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| Enjoyed this piece, especially the tension created between the literal and figurative. I have no idea if this was your intention but . . . "Your silky petals sacred - too delicate to hold" was a pivotal phrase in the piece for me personally. With this phrase you created a sensory illusion that you are not only embracing natures reemergence in the spring, and the unfathomable beauty that accompanies such, but also a vision of inexpressible love with another. |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
4/19/2006 |
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Terrific imagery and wonderful expression. Very nice work.
Tami |
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| Reviewed by Hanley Harding |
12/17/2005 |
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Dear Donna;
Exceptional.
Doc
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
12/5/2005 |
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| mercy me, the imagery in this is stunning! I am in the same mind as Michelle, this reminded me a great deal of japanese paintings and verse in its subject and presentation...one of the better romance of nature works I have seen in quite a while. |
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| Reviewed by Jane Rodway |
11/27/2005 |
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| A real beauty- made me think of the cherry blossom tree and the simplicity of asian art. |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara |
11/26/2005 |
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Very lovely, beautiful visuals, a pleasure to read! Glad I dropped by!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/19/2005 |
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| has the right ingredients to a wonderul romantic poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
11/18/2005 |
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| Romance at its best! |
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