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et in Arcadia ego
by Kate Burnside
Thursday, November 17, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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ET IN ARCADIA EGO
Standing where my life is sand caressed and wetted by lapping waves, I am ready.
My eyes have grown bigger, brighter, greener, changing from fired-earth colours to hues of the deep. My hair, too, has thickened mysteriously, as if threaded with luscious braids, its tawny tones permeated by silvered highlights from distant moon’s aura. Cheekbones have risen, becoming finer, more chiselled, losing their innocent roundness. And all four limbs have extended into long bones that are finely tuned, vibrating with a toned and muscular sleekness.
I wait patiently for the four pillars of wind to rise and for my colour to be sapped, absorbed by approaching forces of rapture and transformation. Shedding final vestige of human identity and collective belonging, I peel away jeans, pull my shirt over my head like a spent husk, kick off the sandals of gentle journeying and service that have measured and defined the steps of my human pilgrimage.
The tide is turning, beckoning and drawing me. It’s time.
Obediently and without looking back, I walk naked into the waters of rebirth, cold biting away existing flesh until sudden moment of change. In the blink of an eye it happens, strong ebb wrapping round my thighs. Numbness is transfused by searing heat as my whole form alters, rising up powerful, radiant and equine.
Here no more, I am present: Where light and waves ride together, I am traces in the air. I am with you as an ageless memory, a rise and fall of time and place, the rosy glow of distance. I am your unshakeable confidence, an indefinable shimmering haze.
In Arcadia esto perpetua
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
11/20/2005 |
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Don't beat about the bush..No pun.
My dad says he married mum cos of her high cheek bones. Cos it makes yer look younger longer...
Weird My hair is thickening too.
Becareful with Eds bare bear... |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
11/20/2005 |
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And may your Arcadia shimmer always, Kate! A powerfully masterful creation; exceptional imagery. Much enjoyed the re-reads.
Peace,
Carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Suzy Karnow (Reader) |
11/19/2005 |
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A wonderful write!
Just what I needed to read today!
THANK YOU!!! |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
11/19/2005 |
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| ET IN ARCADIA EGO, as creative action and completed work of art, is itself an ecstatic metamorphosis that lifts one beyond the mundane toward transcendant empowerment and self-engineerd rebirth. An exhilarating write on every level. |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar |
11/19/2005 |
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That latin phrase reminds of a Nicolas Poussin painting (nowadays I am mixing up names, may be wrong LOL!). I saw a young lady glorifying pastoral life, being fully matured to take the world in her stride, denouncing the materialistic temptations…of which she is well aware. It has the simplicity of Paulo Cuelho and broad strokes of G. G. Marquez, with some breathtaking imagery. Four pillars of wind is an exciting connotation, the pillars are extensions of the four limbs which actually help in locomotion, that wind element makes the read visceral and gives a mental identity to it. Four pillars are transmuted as knowledge input-cum-output device, extension of the self consciousness. The concluding latin phrase stresses N’s (narrator) strong binding and affinity for life and living. Since this appears to be a word painting, and deserves more than one read, I assume I have missed many vital elements. But then, partly to not appear too pretentious (LOL), I concede that I may have missed certain higher levels of communication due to my lack of poetic intelligence. But then as T.S. Eliot said, “poetry should be felt before being understood” (I may have wrongly quoted that, too, LOL), your post succeeds grandly.
Debashish Haar
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
11/18/2005 |
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"...I wait patiently for the four pillars of wind to rise and for my colour to be sapped, absorbed by approaching forces of rapture and transformation. Shedding final vestige of human identity and collective belonging...
Now THAT is writing!
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/18/2005 |
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I walk naked into the waters of rebirth, cold biting away existing flesh until sudden moment of change.
A truly captivating piece, Kate, and I do believe you are now ready for our Polar Bear Swimming Club this winter. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
11/17/2005 |
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Amazing transformation from human to spirit to embodied form to ether, in the continued evolvement of the soul. What a wild ride you have taken us on, Kosmic Kate! This feels like the layers of meditation as we slowly let go of everything and become one with the air, the molecules of our being spreading farther and farther apart until our atoms explode. With no need for resistance, a piece of us unites with everything that is and we realize how important and insignificant we truly are. Excellent write!!
Take care,
Sherry
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/17/2005 |
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| powerfully descriptive prose of renewal and purpose ... you eloquently arouse the equanimity of your spiritual journey with the depth of establishing the design of "an indefinable shimmering haze." exceptional work, Kate ... |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
11/17/2005 |
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Incredible! Vivid. . .imaginative. . .'prosetry' or not, it
is the very essence of poetry. Take a bow!! Come out and
take another. . .and another!! Admiringly, 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Janet Parker |
11/17/2005 |
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| This is amazing. But I don't read anything about a goddess. I read about your glorification in the end. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
11/17/2005 |
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| adoration to the godess within you...this piece is exceptional |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
11/17/2005 |
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| You rock! :-D ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
11/17/2005 |
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I hereby certify that all words appearing beneath these, are, and will continue to be, the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but what Kate wrote, so help me.
Your amazed fan, - Bill
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/17/2005 |
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This is utterly amazing work and wonder sweet Kate and I love it as I am sure the Godess herself will be pleased. Such divine images touching and hinting at the erotic then bringing us back into the reality of the heavens and the magic of rebirth.
Pops |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
11/17/2005 |
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Kate,
WOW!!! take about a make-over. This is powerful stuff. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
11/17/2005 |
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Kate,
I want to be where you so confidently are, this is stunning, breathtaking work--definately a keeper. Thank you--
((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/17/2005 |
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| I agree with Dawn, Awesome work! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/17/2005 |
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| Concise and to the point and the lose of weight does unveil a slimmer side of you which boosts your confidence. Splendid descriptive write. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/17/2005 |
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The imagery is absolutely stunning...love it
Absolutely beautiful!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
11/17/2005 |
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so vivid...I could see this in my minds eye.....
excellent
pax A |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/17/2005 |
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wonderful imagery here, kate; solid writing! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend n america, karen lynn in texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
11/17/2005 |
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| So many lines of perfection they become like gentle waves washing into one another. Your words carry the reader into the heart of your transformative journey, which seems a return to the eternal sea from whence you came - but not a going away, a coming to. This prose piece moved me deeply, Kate. "Where light and waves ride together" yes! that is where I want to be, fully myself and present perpetually. I'm going to have to clean my library shelves to make room for this. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Dawn |
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