|Reviewed by A PAX
|I love the feeling here and the images were bizarre yet comfy....pax A|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|I love the grace and agility of your acrobatic mind...
You can walk a tight-rope of poetry with your eyes closed...
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Yes! This says it all with verve and vitality only the great Kate can bring to us. It is verse that is almost "eye-twinkling" in its perky imagery.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the vigor of your poetic mind makes the day all worth while ... superb imagery, Kate ... growing in leaps & bounds ...|
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Nice work...a lovely piece that is filled with very expressive thoughts...enjoyed...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Great imagery, Kate; and I find the whole poem most enthralling. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|I'm glad you got your second wind and posted this wonderful gem of a write, Kate. "And the moon walks by on stilts." What an image! trees roling stars on shoulders, WOW! Just totally adored this poem. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Sounds like you had a tiring day. Fortunately this pen doesn't reflect the tiredness in you.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|and my brain has been sat on by a frilly-dressed elephant. <---I love your Kate-isms...
Yup wake up bright eyed n bushy tailed.. Fabo' one kate
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|What a burst of sensation this poem is, Kate. You had me feeling each line and recalling the times when each of those things was a heavy burden upon me...and then came the dawn, when the miracle of dreams brought me refreshed into a new day filled with promise and hope. If there is a line in this that is not a perfect 10, I certainly can't find it. Wonderful, wonderful write.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|No matter how tired you give extraordinary pieces of yourself!
Astonishing poem, every line superb!
|Reviewed by J M
|OOh I always love your Poetess wordsmith way with words trhe imagery , metaphors, discriptions gotta save this to read over and over. A pure delight.... Thanks Kate!!!!!!:)
Happy Turkey Day
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Imagery. Fresh imagry, unimagined imagery. clever imagery, and, yes, a special brand of Burnside imagery (Kate kind, that is) ! ! !
I had to go back and read for the third time... to make sure you weren't writing from Hollywood or Disney Planet. Extra well done. And, if this is what they teach in the school where you studied... move over, and maybe they won't notice me. I'm indebted to ya' !
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hey that frilly elephant...made me think....did you try out some of the "elephant juice"???
LOL.....just wondering...hmmmm...okay nevermind...enjoyed the read!!
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|A real assimilable write Kate, one that is easy for the reader to relate too.
It is good to have the hope that tomorrow will reveal another gem for us on life's enigmatic path. Lotta funky mudholes to navigate these days.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
Many a day I have been to this point when I discover that the best thing is to "put up all the lights" and go to sleep with that thrilling expectation of the "fresh theatre of dawn".
Love & Light always and in all ways,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This write and your spirit make each new day and explosion of life and living and when I read your work it is always infectious. Sweet Kate you have an eternal smile welded into your makeup and it shows in almost every one of your writes. I cannot say how much I would miss your work if we should ever lose your presence on the den.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Fabulous write, Kate...
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Great write...great use of metaphors very descriptive write...I loved the line; my legs as heavy as escape artist's chains...sometimes my legs feel as this.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Reviewed by Rusty Daily
|The talented poet uses metaphors, similes and unusual fresh phrases. You managed to do all three. Well done Kate
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|and my brain has been sat on by a frilly-dressed elephant.
That's gotta hurt!
|Reviewed by Marisha Huber
|You never dissapoint! "the rippling arms of naked trees
roll stars across their shoulders" Fantastic!
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|I love the metaphor here, Kate -- life IS like a circus at times. Well done!