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Bench
by Kate Burnside
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I'm currently enamoured of Charles Simic's wry perspectives and plainchant style. And hasta la vista, People... I'm off to Spain on Monday for a few days... :)) Stay well. Kosta Kate xx


BENCH


The garden bench
needs painting;

its white wooden slats,
dropped-on and weathered,
make its invitation to sit
somewhat flaky.

If I were merely to scour it,
it would simply mope
and buckle at the knees
like a scolded child.

So its moodiness lurks
in the shady corner;
its open-armed
Big Love
conditional.



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Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary
Nicely done, I love the imagery you've used!
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Fantastic write. Love the descriptions. Unique, too. One for my library! Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Cryssa C
I don't have a garden bench...don't have a garden yet, either, come to think of it...
I enjoyed the different use of words to bring to life the imagery of the weathered bench..."dropped-on, flaky, & buckling at the knees..."
All the words together painted that bench in beautiful colors.

Cryssa
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Wonderfully penned Kate, benches and people so much alike
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
A moody bench. Mine's on my front porch, bleached, cold and forlorn, waiting for more bleaching in the summer sun. Love this one. Animating the old bench is wonderful. Liz
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
I like what Jude said. I have a garden bench in my balcony. The bench was my mother's. A lot of conversations took place, there. Your poem brought it home for me.

Carmen
Reviewed by Dale Clark
very nice, Kate... love it! Have fun in Spain and Take Care!!
Reviewed by jude forese
really like how you personalized the bench ... take the inanimate commonplace, bring it to life ...
Reviewed by blue soplain
....a back home again feel after your travels; the mundane seen in a new tilt.a.whirl. . .the everyday even becoming more every....day....and how it ebckons us to a grinding halt
. i ahve been reading of your travel.logs in poetica. . . and been missing your steady mantra.esque voice.
glad to read you always.
ness
Reviewed by E T Waldron
who'd a thunk it, making a bench poetic;-)
Kool Kate is who,and she's off to spain again!
I want to go, boo hoo...have fun, hasta la vista!

ET
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Excellent write, Kate; brava! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Great poem,I enjoy reading it.Have fun in Spain and please stay safe.take care

Edwin
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
very nice write--have a wonderful time in Spain!
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Hi Kate, such a personality, eh? I'd be moody too being weathered and dropped on... smile.... have fun, Kate!

In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Once when I was sailing I came upon a channel bouy marker that was white. I had never seen a white marker before, nor was one on any of my charts.
As I got closer I saw that it really was green, but had peen "painted" white by Pelicans....LOL



Walt
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Kate,

You personalize an ordinary park bench and make it extraordinary. Well done! Have fun in Spain - ole!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Kate, I love this. You take an inanimate object...a bench...and give it life. Have a wonderful time in Spain!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
I need to give my faithful old garden bench a new coat of paint myself. And Vaya con Dios, Kosta Kate!
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Wowwwwwwww..sounds wonderful..enjoyed very much sweet lady...stay safe and well..Hugsss
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
You express so much from a seemingly insignificant object; you have made it not insignificant at all via your verses. Thank you, Kate. Hasta luego y buen viaje. Amor y paz,

Regis
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
I bet that bench sits with unconditonal open arms....love this Kate! Spain...sounds so nice! Have a great time
Love
Christine
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Kate, I'd love to join you in Spain, but I've got a bench to paint.
-gene.
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Kate,
It's the transfer of emotion/reaction to the inanimate that makes this sing, excellent projection, ever so endearing.
John
Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
Kate,

Sensory and complete with visual images. Excellent. Makes me want to visit my lawn furniture, almost.

Cynthia
Reviewed by L. Figgins
I've always loved flaky and worn lawn furniture because it is a visual testament to time and use. But as you've expressed, not too inviting, lol. Love this, Kate...

Lin
Reviewed by Felix Perry
There is something like a dependent child feeling about garden furniture isn't there? I know I have an old rocking chair that normally sits on my front porch but the paint was peeled off so bad I moved it around back to be scraped and painted...like a child who has played in the mud and comes home for a bath. Great write and loved this format...have fun in Spain.
hugs
Fee
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