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Alone Together
by Kate Burnside

Thursday, September 24, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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ALONE TOGETHER


How we are:

you in your
small corner,
I in mine.

And what we
long to be.

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Reviewed by Art Sun 10/11/2009
Isn't it this way at times, living and yet life passing us by, that longing keeping us as we are. Your thoughts bring us that visual of being and yet knowing the reality of ourselves...

nice work Kate...
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 9/29/2009
Ah, that makes four of you, four different roles. Insightful and intriguing in its brevity....Jerry
Reviewed by Cryssa C 9/28/2009
Similarities and differences... we decide which we concentrate on & that determines what "we" become.

Cryssa
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 9/25/2009
This one gets me thinking, Kate. I like the way you leave some to the imagination. There's all that inbetween to consider. Well written!
Sheila
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 9/25/2009
interesting and thought provoking
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/25/2009
stunning! Kate you have such a fine grasp of the deama of poetry...
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 9/25/2009
...sharing the same space, but emotionally alone! Powerfully penned, Kate.

Carole~
Reviewed by George Ellison (Reader) 9/25/2009
Whether in a crowded room or with our significant other, we can always be alone if that's what we choose. And it is always a choice, no?
Reviewed by Dale Clark 9/25/2009
'alone together' you capture it well, simply alone.
Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 9/25/2009
Painfully obvious. Nicely done, Kate.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 9/25/2009
Perfect title. Very acute in its effect yet, perhaps, chronic in its origin for those who know the slow build to "disconnect." Yet, the use of the word "long" somehow offers hope to these two as it is a point of common ground. Where there is longing, perhaps there too can be reconciliation - a coming together through the dissolution of the space that separates.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 9/25/2009
Like two parallels not even coming together in the infinite.

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/25/2009
So few words sweet Kate and yet such a wealth of emotions, feelings, desires and yearning all drifting and floating in a mimosa of love. To feel this strong a reaction in my own heart to these few words mean that you as a poetess have done your job...bravo Kate...
hugs
Pops
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/25/2009
Alone Together - says volumes in just two words.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 9/24/2009
Kate, how I can feel this. So short...yet filled with so much.
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 9/24/2009
some see sharp edges others see rounded corners....
great title
Reviewed by Lori Moore 9/24/2009
Together is often a lonely place.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 9/24/2009
So poignant in so few words. Liz
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/24/2009
..I like Jude's comment...so much said in this write Kate,,great work!
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 9/24/2009
Now My dear, you have written a poem of longing. Lovely and to the point. Sometimes is makes our blood burn the more you have to wait to fulfill that meeting of mind and body.

Hope your corner gets filled soon.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/24/2009
Doesn't get much better than this, Kate: effectively penned sadness. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by jude forese 9/24/2009
hopefully for all concerned, the longing is to augment the corner's angles and discover a new circumference outward into geometric heavens ...

laconic, thought-provoker ...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/24/2009
It is indeed amzing how you can express so much so succinctly, dear Kate. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Paul Berube 9/24/2009
Deep, Kate.
Reviewed by F William Broome 9/24/2009

Love it! Love it! Love it!
Reviewed by George Carroll 9/24/2009
The depth of feeing in this poem can only be felt by those who have walked in those shoes and know how empty at times we can be in a room that has so many shadows, yet no light.
Reviewed by Ted Bossis 9/24/2009
somewhere somehow 2 corners will make a circle )~(Billy joel;Summer highland falls)"They say that these are not the best of times,
But they're the only times I've ever known,
And I believe there is a time for meditation in cathedrals of our own.
Now I have seen that sad surrender in my lover's eyes,
And I can only stand apart and sympathize.

For we are always what our situations hand us...
It's either sadness or euphoria.
And so we argue and we compromise,
and realize that nothing's ever changed,
For all our mutual experience, our seperate conclusions are the same.

Now we are forced to recognize our inhumanity,
Our reason co-exists with our insanity.
And though we choose between reality and madness...
It's either sadness or euphoria.

How thooughtlessly we dissipate our energies
Perhaps we don't fulfill each other's fantasies.
And so we'll stand upon the ledges of our lives,
With our respective similarities...
It's either sadness or euphoria." )evol~Ted(
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/24/2009
Don't do this, Kate. In our small corners, so confining, incarceration of spirit and love and our longing as vast as the oceans. Beautiful.

John
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/24/2009
Oh, Kate, I have been in that corner. It is a miserable way to be. I don't wish that on anybody, because the heart-rendering misery sitting alone in your corner as you stare across the room at the one you used to love in her corner, there are actually no words to describe the loneliness that is so awful you feel that blood will surely began to shoot from your eyes. Simple poem with DeeP meaning.



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