|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Kate a poem of breathtaking descriptives and the beauty only you can weave.|
|Reviewed by Charlie
|So much control in this crescendo of imagery, with a double ff ending-- loud and exhuberant. 'Tis a thing of beauty. --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
There are so many facets to this poem. It Shines in of itself. Love is like a shiny jewel fit for a queen or king bestowing upon them a crown of beauty and let me tell you your line between mind's shoreline and the moon is deeply moving and inspiring!!!
Great poem, now onto your part two..
Much peace, love and light,
Amber (Moonshine lol)
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Today, I spent hours trying to feed and take care of a little hatchling and once again I felt the fragility of life, its strength, its beauty... Because of this experience, your poem felt like a meditation on life and its value, its splendor. Your poem shines a different color with each reader.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Craftsmanship in the finest as it is 'felt'..and to the moon! wow|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Love the last verse especially-beautiful work!|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Beauty blushed full blown rose for Lady Kate.
Wonderful shining delightful poetry.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle
|"...not bushel-buried..." is one among a dazzling array of images in this shining, shifting, rare sepulcher-resplendent shimmer of shapes and sounds designed so carefully to caress the reader into a state of rapt appreciation for the authentic aura of ardor that permeates this ripe plum of a poem... nicely done, Kate.|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Kate, your diamond jubilee glitters and glistens with a unique corona surround - you have captured the essential glow of Regina on the Thames with your unique verbal talent - and what a polished gem it is - bravo! - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Earl grey carats stirred with crystal facets...luster brew drink of her majesty, Kate...be well.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Shine On!!!! I too bow to the literary lady.|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Synergism seems apparent here as I too felt compelled to write about light this morning, addressing similar phenomena that eludes most some of the time, and remains companion for some most of the time. Beautifully rendered.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You provide much substance to ponder upon in your verses here, Kate. There is so much symbolism to interpret. You certainly awaken thought. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Doesn't matter how many times we do, each time to be in love is well worth the end of same...e|
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|Kate, this piece could be the thoughts of a lapidary, a miner dreaming, a human being growing and changing until reaching a peak of acheivement...or so many other things...I suspect you delight in keeping a reader's thoughts "darkly sparkling", just as you delight in the enjoyment your words bring...well done. Be well, Kathy
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Shine it does and I agree with Kenny, Kate, many hidden gems in this Gem of a poem...Enjoyed as always...
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|are you in jubilee mood, Kate?
certainly inspired by recent events..
'buffed by nothing but its own reason;'
how i wish for a personal and universal polishing
with reason-soaked cloth
as always, a joy!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|tis a place the soul is bejeweled to emit a sacred shine "between the shoreline and the moon" so it may sparkle its fragrant petals around the warmth of its hidden shrine ...|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|What a precious piece laced with Kate Metaphors.
You always let your readers glean what they will.
I Bow and Curtsey to you, Literary Lady.
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
love your use of light in this piece.
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|Sunrise spilling into still lake, igniting a soul mate. Deep connection. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Let me guess. The evolution of a diamond from the molten source of itts beginning to the watery cutting of its facets to the setting of its splendor on the mark that is the monarchy.
Happy Diamond Jubilee!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|I keep visualizing some sort of exotic, maybe even a man-devouring plant as I read this.
Phrases such as "in its frail-flesh husk, each unhewn facet," and "Each new-escaping beam renders its face a rose â€“ beauty-blushed, full-open â€“"
I love the excellent wordplay, and I apologize for not being able to completely "get" it. Patrick is probably right, and it is love in some form or other.
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|love how you sparkle words into these gems|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Excellant composition that delivers the utmost dramatic effect to the reader. Well done Kate.
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Ah to fall in love again...Patrick|
|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|Wonderful hidden gems in this poem, kate!|