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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/20/2007 |
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These are powerful and meaningful sentiments, Sharon. Respectfully, I ponder them. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
2/24/2007 |
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yes good write
trust can be hard sometime but when its given, its bliss
pax A |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
2/23/2007 |
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A nice poetic thought...and a nice view of the trust we must create and accept in order to live within love....
nice work....Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/23/2007 |
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trust is the essential element in loving others ... somehing we should protect with all our hearts ...
a beautiful aand insightful poem, Sharon ... |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
2/22/2007 |
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wow
short and sweet
wonderful share!!! |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
2/22/2007 |
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| short n sweet |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
2/21/2007 |
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My dear Sharon,
Living in Southern California as we do with thousands coming and going daily, unearned, untested trust is oftentimes foolhardy and naive. For many people, taking advantage of someone's trust is a way of life. It's the way they make a living.
Trust in God and trust your own judgment.
One reliable test is to discover the reality of in whom or what does the other person place their trust? If they don't place their trust in God, then their values are different from mine. Sometimes a first clue is observing that they don't trust anybody but themselves.
Forgive me for preaching, but Satan's emissaries are everywhere.
When God comes first, everything else falls in proper order.
Go with God,
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
2/21/2007 |
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| Love without trust, is on dead end street.. |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
2/21/2007 |
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| many truths in this poem. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/21/2007 |
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This is a deep offering!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Michael Mathieu |
2/21/2007 |
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To give of yourself so completely and trust one another,
Michael |
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| Reviewed by J M |
2/21/2007 |
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Beautiful truths and has spirtual basis of truth also Sharon.
Peace,
Joselyn |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
2/21/2007 |
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Sharon,
This doesn't waste any words and is so deep in meaning. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/21/2007 |
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Profound statement that is a big commitment in love and in the ones we pull close to our hearts in a protective shield. Blind trust is the hardest of all, for although I believe trust must be earned, if it is given blindly, when or if that trust is broken so is the innocence of the heart broken forever.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Tactfully Naive |
2/20/2007 |
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Becoming aware of and loving ourselves (not in the vanity sense) is a prerequisite to loving others. Trust has to be earned as well as learned. For me, cynicism grew the more I was betrayed throughout the years. Mercifully, this negative feeling has largely diminished. I let my intuition play the trust card. Loving someone in Christ's name is almost a mantra in church circles. One wonders if this act is a copout to love in one's own name. The mind boggles.
You manage to address first person singular, third person plural, and also first person plural. As such the personal injunction has a universal appeal.
Regards
Dai
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
2/20/2007 |
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| That is a beautiful pledge. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
2/20/2007 |
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| It's a good thing for all of us to meditate on that subject. |
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