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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
1/4/2009 |
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| Great thinking put to pen and posted here. Glad I saw it and pulled it up and read it. Just browsing today and getting some very good writes to ponder over as I can ponder over this one too. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
12/18/2007 |
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Philosophical poetic beauty... "Time Locked" abounds in contents and message.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
10/7/2007 |
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From the moment we take that first breath, until the day of our last, "Time Locked" and every moment is PAST. . .So inspiring. . .
Excellent write Sharon...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/4/2007 |
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An excellent write Sharon
In time once the movement is set in motion
There is no returning
Then again, time is but a concept.
Peace & love Be With You
William
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
10/4/2007 |
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Nice work...one can sit and view back in time and wish to change the events and or situations...to better or improve or even stop time ...yet it is all within the destiny of life...
nicely penned thought...
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
8/24/2007 |
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| You have captured a thought that often comes to my mind. What if I could go back just for a moment,and tell someone how much I cared. Enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
8/18/2007 |
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| Very clever writing...well done |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
8/18/2007 |
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Enjoyed this very much my friend...I know if we could go back...we would all change something. Wouldn't it be grand if we could, but as life would have only occasionally do we get a second chance...but we've always got our memory and what a grand thing that is...enjoyed this very much!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by d. krusky |
8/18/2007 |
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Loved this!! How very true that we can never go back to the past. I enjoyed the first two lines, they drew me in to read the work in its entirety. Great write!
Smiles,
Dorothy |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/17/2007 |
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Spot on!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
8/16/2007 |
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Talk about hitting home! Very clever of you to devise a form that
very nearly makes the point in-and-of itself. Knowing. . .Ever. . .Locked. . .Dying. . .Past. . .Y E S!
Thank you for writing and sharing this. Blessings+++, 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
8/16/2007 |
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| Sharon, this is a very smart poem. This is why people need to treat each moment like it is their last. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
8/16/2007 |
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You and I need a means of playing a game, CONTEMPLATION, on the air waves of the computer. You are good at it, and this poem proves it by a wide margin. Thank you for stretching my mind. Top-notch writing and reasoning ! ! ! - Bill
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/16/2007 |
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You provide substance for thought via your verses here, Sharon. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/16/2007 |
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The clock traditionally has been linked to life and death, but in this write you bring the clock to life and make it a living entity as it traps the souls of the unwary. As I stop for a second or perhaps three, I think back at all the major events in my life and yes most of them were less than a minute but did change the course of time for me. Brilliant write Sharon.
Felix L Perry |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
8/16/2007 |
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It is always good when we can honestly poetize the struggle of being human. A touching write!
Richard |
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