by Rene' Bennett
Saturday, August 11, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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It's time for me to let go
Of this pain I've come to know
Little did I see to late
I was destined to this fate
Falling tears of memories past
Just how long must sorrow last
A broken heart is meant to heal
And once again start to feel
Grieving soul, troubled mind
I've served my sentence, done my time
Darkened skies, clouds of grey
Make this hurt go away
Step by step, one by one
I'll climb this ladder rung by rung
Yes, I'm ready to begin
To love, to live, to breathe again
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|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|A rare and beautiful look at a soul gaining ground.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Great write acknowledging when it is time to begin living once again and perhaps to find true love.....
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Love "gone wrong" hurts. It is a universal theme. You express this very well in your verses, René. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Outstanding write...Your title caught my eye and drew me inside your den...well done, a write that most can relate to in one way or another! Enjoyed, so glad I stopped by you den.