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| Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader) |
12/11/2004 |
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| Tommy, I'm really feeling this one. Oh, those memories of the mind, pictures in a photo albums, and any little keepsake. Thanks for sharing this. |
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| Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader) |
12/5/2004 |
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| Lovely...very romantic. |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
8/20/2004 |
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| Beautiful romance. You do these well. Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Evelyn Simon |
8/4/2004 |
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| Beautiful poem, John. Well done. :o) |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
8/4/2004 |
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A beautifully weaved poetic write, Tommy - finely composed!
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/4/2004 |
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| Tender and painfully true, John. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
8/2/2004 |
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| Tommy, it truly is amazing how the first love, forever burns deep within our soul. I want you to know my friend, this exceptionally well-written piece of timeless poetry, brought me to tears my friend. You have a remarkable gift for reaching inside, and shedding the light. Thank you for sharing it. Peace thru precious memories. |
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| Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader) |
8/1/2004 |
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| Tommy this is one heavenly write...so beautiful the thought that love never dies but transforms in ways we simply can not fathom, until of course your poetry reminded us that love endures...Fletcher B |
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| Reviewed by Rose Limongi |
8/1/2004 |
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Our first love is one we shall never forget - and this poem is proof positive that your first love resides in your heart and mind to this day. Beautiful and touching.
~Rose~ |
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| Reviewed by Amira van Kerk |
8/1/2004 |
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Oh Tommy,
this one is so sad and touching.
It's the irony of fate that, once it is too late, we regret things we have done or haven't done and said.
Even if she is in heaven now, she will know what you felt for her, how true and honest your love was. I am sure about this.
Keep well.
Excellent write. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
8/1/2004 |
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| A very sweet and heart touching write. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/1/2004 |
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| moving poetry ... |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
8/1/2004 |
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Tommy, we never forget our first loves. No matter where life takes us, our first loves are forever with us.
Truly a beautiful and touching write.
Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/1/2004 |
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When my time on earth ends
And I leave for heaven
Sad I shall not be
My first love again I shall see
Truly hope you do, Tommy. First loves truly are a very special thing.
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/1/2004 |
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Deep touching piece Tommy!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
8/1/2004 |
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A beautiful touching poem for a Sunday morning here in South Africa. I am sitting in my office with a winter sun streaming through the window, listening to the sound of bird song and reading poetry. What a lovely start to my day.
Thanks
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/31/2004 |
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This is so deeply touching Tommy!How sad that we all feel
such guilt at these times. It shouldn't be.
I'm glad you ended with hope and faith! Wonderful poem! |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
7/31/2004 |
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I can remember my heart being broken into 10,000 little pieces..
Excellent write John....... |
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