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John T Banasiewicz Jr

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First Love
by John T Banasiewicz Jr
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Young we were so deep in love


Carefree our thoughts about each other


Earth was ours and only ours


Just you and me together


 


We never thought neither one would leave


Our love was that deep


But waking from my deep sleep


I heard the words I cry when I repeat


 


Earth was not you place no more


Heaven had now become home


Shock was not the feeling I felt


Shame came over me


 


Shame for not telling you more


Shame for not sharing more


Shame for not caring more


Shame oh shame for ever more


 


Still this day I see you smile


Your voice in my ears


I feel your arms around me


Love can endure


 


When my time on earth ends


And I leave for heaven


Sad I shall not be


My first love again I shall see


 


John Thomas Banasiewicz Jr


 


Copyright October 3, 2003



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Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader)
Tommy, I'm really feeling this one. Oh, those memories of the mind, pictures in a photo albums, and any little keepsake. Thanks for sharing this.
Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
Lovely...very romantic.
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Beautiful romance. You do these well. Enjoyed.
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Beautiful poem, John. Well done. :o)
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
A beautifully weaved poetic write, Tommy - finely composed!

Robert
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Tender and painfully true, John. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
Tommy, it truly is amazing how the first love, forever burns deep within our soul. I want you to know my friend, this exceptionally well-written piece of timeless poetry, brought me to tears my friend. You have a remarkable gift for reaching inside, and shedding the light. Thank you for sharing it. Peace thru precious memories.
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Tommy this is one heavenly write...so beautiful the thought that love never dies but transforms in ways we simply can not fathom, until of course your poetry reminded us that love endures...Fletcher B
Reviewed by Rose L
Our first love is one we shall never forget - and this poem is proof positive that your first love resides in your heart and mind to this day. Beautiful and touching.

~Rose~
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
Oh Tommy,
this one is so sad and touching.
It's the irony of fate that, once it is too late, we regret things we have done or haven't done and said.
Even if she is in heaven now, she will know what you felt for her, how true and honest your love was. I am sure about this.
Keep well.
Excellent write.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
A very sweet and heart touching write.
Reviewed by jude forese
moving poetry ...
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Tommy, we never forget our first loves. No matter where life takes us, our first loves are forever with us.
Truly a beautiful and touching write.

Lisa
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
When my time on earth ends
And I leave for heaven
Sad I shall not be
My first love again I shall see

Truly hope you do, Tommy. First loves truly are a very special thing.


Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Deep touching piece Tommy!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Chanti Niven
A beautiful touching poem for a Sunday morning here in South Africa. I am sitting in my office with a winter sun streaming through the window, listening to the sound of bird song and reading poetry. What a lovely start to my day.
Thanks
Chanti
Reviewed by E T Waldron
This is so deeply touching Tommy!How sad that we all feel
such guilt at these times. It shouldn't be.
I'm glad you ended with hope and faith! Wonderful poem!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
I can remember my heart being broken into 10,000 little pieces..
Excellent write John.......
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