|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|This is a well written and very good poem.take care
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|I gained a different message from your poem than you probably intended. It reminded me of dreams I've had of falling, frightening dreams of me sailing through the air after being ejected from a vehicle into a seemingly bottomless space. I'm told that dreams are the processing method for our fears--and hopes--thus; I suppose it is a symbol of not wanting to fail. (In my dreams I also felt a certain peace while being so afraid it woke me up.)|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|excellent write Theresa
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|For some reason I really like the picture
and your write.
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|Interesting rhythm this one; it's in four time but each line seems to have unity with the others not through rhyme but the meter. Almost makes a rocking up then down motion on each line. And I guess that rising and falling feel is appropriate given the subject. I like the title coming out of the last line...pretty difficult to write I'd say
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|We can only fall so far before we start to climb and it is okay to accept the help from others along our way. Thank you for sharing Theresa
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|With each step of our journey we must first learn to walk before we can run, filled with wisdom in such a delicate, gentle fashion...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Great write! Sometimes one has to fall so they can be reminded of how precious things are . Its then they realize , and start climbing up ward again. I've been there , done that...M|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very spiritually thought awakening...just how far must we fall in order to learn to climb back up and can we do it alone without anothers help...imteresting indeed Theresa.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Very, very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|A poignant, heartfelt write, Theresa, powerfully imaged and penned. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.