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| Reviewed by Leann Marshall |
3/5/2008 |
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I can certainly identify with this from my younger days. I think I've pretty much whipped the unruly muscle into shape. :)
This was wonderful--thanks for sharing it. |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
7/31/2004 |
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| How unique! And, interestingly, I use small letters when I am feeling 'unruly', also. When I don't feel like being me, am sick of my mind or tired of life. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
6/13/2004 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Monika Arnett |
6/12/2004 |
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| There are no set rules of the heart, indeed...unruly! Bravo! To my dear and cherished friend... I embrace you with love and peace! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/12/2004 |
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| The heart is not alone in its unruly nature. Nice write. |
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| Reviewed by anne cunningham |
6/11/2004 |
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| unruly is as unruly does, and this is and does .. welcome to the den |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/11/2004 |
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your heart may be an unruly muscle but its pulse is very strong ...
i really like the phrasing and concept ... |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
6/11/2004 |
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Firstly, welcome to Authors Den.. :)
Your poem is full to the brim of emotion and wisdom...
Really well written......ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Jane Rodway |
6/11/2004 |
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| This is emotional and intense- I like the set-up. |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
6/11/2004 |
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A write that beats out the truth. Wonderfully said.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
6/11/2004 |
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oh wow........this is so so true........wise one you are!!!!!!!!!
well done..........its a keeper!!!
pax.........A |
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