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beyond ow...
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autumn blair-strange
Saturday, June 12, 2004
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i need to plunge my pen into the grief so i can reach the other side
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your leaving has left
my eyes cried out,
they feel like
freshly peeled plums
swollen,moist,plump
left vulnerable
from the pain
of the peeling
like your death has
left my heart
wrung out and
left vulnerable
from the pain
i'm left reeling
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
10/21/2009 |
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Your imagery is superb! I would just add a w to your title for this review... beyond Wow!
Cryssa :~) |
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| Reviewed by Monika Arnett |
8/28/2004 |
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| Beautiful portrait...and insightful pain penned. Always remember the everlasting spirit of the ones you love, and paint this portrait upon your heart. |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
6/20/2004 |
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| I agree with M J, this is extremely poignant |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
6/13/2004 |
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| poignant .... i too have solace in writing |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/13/2004 |
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| A painful write, but writing is a good way to eventually alleviate pain...Peace thru the Write, Ed & rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
6/12/2004 |
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| painful poetry but the expression is so well delivered. |
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