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fits and starts
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autumn blair-strange
Sunday, June 13, 2004
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just a brief observation
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the pain comes in
fits and starts
like the rag-ged breaths
crying imparts
must be the territory
of broken hearts
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| Reviewed by Monika Arnett |
5/4/2006 |
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| This is how I felt when my little "boysie" Chihuahua, Romeo died. Thanks for being there! Embracing in Love and Light! |
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| Reviewed by Helen Downey |
5/3/2005 |
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| So much said in such few words! Helen |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Andrews |
7/23/2004 |
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| sweet and painful. You have talent- don't ever stop. Jerry |
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| Reviewed by anne cunningham |
6/13/2004 |
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| i've been doing some "collage" art of late, the words and the formatting of this reminded me of both the grief process and my current art process (the stops, the starts, the jagged-ness). i really like how you worked these particular words down the page, which is exactly how i feel when on one of my "masterpieces" actually comes out. -anne |
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