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You're Not All Gone
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autumn blair-strange
Sunday, June 13, 2004
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still tenderly touching my bruised hreart
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it's now after you went
but,you aren't really gone
i still smell your scent
even though i'm alone
your coat's by the door
your shoes under the bed
i can't believe you're no more
it won't get through my head
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| Reviewed by Zach McClure |
1/29/2008 |
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I feel as if I know you, because of this poem.
You have put your heart and truth into your writing, and therefore, I feel less alone now than before I read "You're Not All Gone"
Thankyou for your willingness to share your deepest thoughts, Autumn.
(Hug)
In Christ. |
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| Reviewed by Gerald Tate |
7/14/2007 |
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Hi
You still have your good memories, and your children. And to put the icing on the cake-----you still have your pen...WRITE ON.
Good luck, GERALD J TATE |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
6/20/2004 |
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| I am so sorry for your loss. I am also glad that you can write about it |
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| Reviewed by Carmel Victor |
6/14/2004 |
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| I appreciate such sentimental poem. God has surely blessed you with all of the strength that seems to be flowing from you. |
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| Reviewed by anne cunningham |
6/13/2004 |
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| this was very, very cathartic ... and conducive to further growth of a relationship as it goes through its most ultimate change over the greatest physical distance. he is not all gone, and neither are you. there is a love that lies deep, untouched. |
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