Heart to Heart (Collab with Abe)
by Ann Piatt
Monday, August 09, 2004
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Thanks Abe! Once again, you provide the music...
I asked my heart why I could not hear love's music --
It told me because I was not listening to the beat.
So, I asked my heart what would happen if I danced --
It told me love would remove those two left feet.
I asked my heart how, once broken, could I take a chance --
It told me I only needed to be willing to make a new start.
So, I asked my heart why I couldn’t listen to my head --
It told me my thoughts were in the gray in matters of the heart.
I asked my heart why I could not trust my eyes --
It told me someone’s heart is more than just skin deep.
So, I asked my heart if size is something that matters --
It told me to ask the baby in mother's arms as it sleeps.
I asked my heart why it always felt like it was somewhere in the red --
It told me one needed to know pain to recognize true love again.
So, I asked my heart why it ever had to be broken and left for dead --
It told me the wonder of a heart was, if desired, it would mend.
I asked my heart why it seemed to be a traitor to me always --
It told me it was a gift, and not betrayal, for a heart to be lovingly stolen.
So, I asked my heart if it was time for it to again be offered away --
It told me hope springs eternal when a new doorway is fearlessly opened.
I asked my heart how to enter the fire and know how not to get burned --
It told me a heart risks all to love again and finds the will to never look back.
So, I stopped asking my heart questions and just listened to what it said --
It whispered into my soul...
It's 5 a.m., do you know where your heart is at?
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|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Exceptionally well-written and seamless poetry make this an outstanding composition! Excellent creative collaboration! Well-done you two! Thank you for sharing it.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
|Wonderful collaboration! Super!
|Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr
|nice flow you two have here with this write. So many times I think hard thing to do is to listen to the heart and not ask so many questions.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent collaboration Ann!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|"It told me it was a gift, and not betrayal, for a heart to be lovingly stolen." < < < luv this line|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Ann and Abe,Wonderful collaboration! Love the finale
message of wisdom!
|Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
|Great questions and great answers. Thanks.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was a wonderful collaboration, simply outstanding you two!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|(((Ann and Abe)))
Wonderful collab; you two shine brilliantly on this, just like the Northern Lights! The Northern Lights don't have ANYTHING on you guys! LOL GREAT Job!
(((HUGS))) and love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
wonderful collaboration, excellent composition, meter, rhyme! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the way you ended this one! You both, write really well together.|