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Butterfly Wings
by Ann Piatt
Friday, September 24, 2004
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when you put your arms around me
or hold my hand,
I can feel your love --
and when you look into my eyes,
or smile my way,
I can see your love --
but through time and distance
three little words
let me hear your love --
and the gaps in between
are melted miles
as words
float, linger --
dance
like butterfly wings
gently fluttering within
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
9/27/2004 |
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Ann,
Very-well conceived and written - wonderful!!
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/24/2004 |
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Beautiful tender write!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
9/24/2004 |
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| beautiful and warm :) |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/24/2004 |
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Ann,
Beautiful imagery. Love the ending. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
9/24/2004 |
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True. albeit we love, but like all the best things one can't see it.
Maybe feel it..
Very nicely done.. |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
9/24/2004 |
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| nicely said |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
9/24/2004 |
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Beautiful. The butterfly images is great.
"and the gaps in between
are melted miles" Awesome line!
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