|Reviewed by Joanna Leone
|This poem has captured my heart! You are very creative, and you write in such a way that opens up my mind! You really know how to capture the readers attention and express an important idea!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a captivating and imaginative poem ...|
|Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|"...I show them how to take back life
In their hands so they can feel
to create dreams their very own
will make life much more real
sadly hearts and minds are constantly
hit by the ‘Hopelessness’ truck
with money in hand, they’ll stand in line
buying my dreams for just a buck..."
So true. I'v been teaching goal setting for years. Some just don't give a damn.
Thoughtful work and I love the rhyme.
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|Interesting write. Also interesting that these
same dreams get sold in New York...a coast to coast
LOl at Mountain Poet's comment.
|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|Very nicely done.
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Good rhythm. Nice to see you come through, Anthony.|
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Damn, I only have 50 cents.|
|Reviewed by Henry Stevens
|Imaginative, well done. Henry|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|This was pretty cool my friend you did well.|