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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
9/9/2006 |
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| Yup keep it golden.. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
9/9/2006 |
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Xian
Beautiful word play and interchanging of mood and feeling
Peter |
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| Reviewed by J M |
9/9/2006 |
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I found this very well penned and expressed many can relate.
"iris to iris, browns to browns
fade together
co-existent consolation
an adorned togetherness
never bright enough
to drown a life " |
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