|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|an interesting poem though it is a bit abstruse ...|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I agree with Jim's comment. Why not use simple language for this?
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|Using that many big words at the beginning of a poem probably guarantees that a lot of people won't finish reading it. I suppose this has to do with visiting a grave of someone you weren't fond of, but if that is the case, why bother going. I suppose if it is a lover who dumped you for someone else and then died early, that might explain it better -- especially if you postulate a ghost whispering to you on the breeze.|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|I would like to understand the logic and feel the thoughts, it looks very cryptic...STyle of the poem is familiar...