by Michelle Smolen
Sunday, May 16, 2004
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As your kicking happily in the womb
Out side we wait for you to bloom
Anticipation, our hearts racing
Now we come to the birthing day
All of your family, each breath we pray
I can see you in my minds eye
Being born to this world with a healthy cry
Pink and beautiful as your name
Aurora ~ waiting for you to claim
We bid you out of your peaceful dwelling
Into the light,to Mommie's arms and Daddy's pride swelling
Grand Parents, Aunties, Uncles and cousins
Freinds of family by the dozen
We are all out here cheering you on
Come and claim your name Goddess of the Dawn!
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|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Aurora is a beautiful name. Nice job in the rhyme department. The idea of a baby blooming is really good. The is simply a sweet write.|
|Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen
|How easily these words seem to come to you, while I struggle on. A beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Oh my dear now you have me hoping this last month goes by so quick!!!! My husband and I can't wait to meet our Dimitri!
Beautiful piece! Congrats! :O)
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
this is a stunningly beautiful write--love the analogy! i, too, adore the lights...they just don't come down to texas usually...it's rare indeed when they do, and a time for celebration (at least for me and karen)! your best yet! a keeper *thank you*
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|The northern lights will be shining bright when little Aurora makes her entrance! I pray all goes well; y'all are in my prayers! LOVE the name! Great job on this, Michelle!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Michelle, you run through this so easily like the words are flowing from your hand. Great poetry. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen