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Diary of a being in the universe
by Michelle Smolen

Saturday, October 15, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Chapter One~ Birth~ My tiny Green Eyes

From the moment I opened
My tiny Green Eyes.
My first peircing cries,
gasping for air to humanize
this new vehicle~ now defined
in this skin that binds
me to the Earth~ energy,movement,sences
hog tied
stupified, I have been compartmentalized
Into this flesh, now I must begin to reorganize
my thoughts,what am I?
questions blindside
I must learn to connect~ objectify
what it means to be modified, socialized
I can feel my connection to the Earth the Air, the Tide
magnetized, mesmerized
Yet~bound in newborn confines
I cry and cry
for nothing I say comes out right!
FRUSTERATED! I search for any comforting sight
finally ~ warm hands, soothing words, then flight,as I am lifted from darkness
and carried into the light
Offered refreshment;liquid,warm,& spiked
with love& with spirit& ties that bind
Ancestors& bloodlines
pass down the vine
questioning the undefined
boundries of the universe~ unconfined
nurishment,contentment,soft breast heartbeat,of this Mother of mine
by the people who show love to me
"Family" clarified
This woman,who calms with coos& sighs with the man by her side
I'm safe,I'm connected,I have a new tribe
To comunicate~ I just pout, whine& cry
Someone comes quickly to figure out why
They bounce,they sing,& they feed me
as They dry My tiny Green Eyes...

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Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 10/28/2006
Great to read out loud too.
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 10/17/2005


i see what you mean, 'chell ... i think you're right, about that soul tribe thang. very nice to read you.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/17/2005

Metered and rhymed perfectly, a mesmeizing entry and write! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen 10/16/2005
This is excellent. I love the rhythm and the way rhyme adds to the flow. I can tell you worked hard on this one. It was worth the effort.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 10/16/2005
Excellent poem, Michelle of those first days when we are welcomed to this planet. It must be confusing at best I would think. I love the poems that flow with unforced rhyme.
Take care,
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/16/2005
You must be inspired for sure. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you, Michelle.

Reviewed by Lori Moore 10/15/2005
This is packed with wonderful images, but it is the rhyme that really catches my attention. Fabulous.
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