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~Indigo~ Elga

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Under Silt
by ~Indigo~ Elga
Saturday, November 19, 2005
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For where no hope is left,
is left no fear.

John Milton (16081674), English poet.
Paradise Regained (1671).


Under Silt 

Sadness breeds in stagnant pools
Walled in ponds which cannot flow
In murky depths of silent pain
And emotions under silt don’t grow

Therefore love is not achieved
As oxygen therein is depleted
That which touches poisoned water
Gasping; meets its end …defeated!

~*~

© Elga ~Indigo~
14 November 2005 – All Rights Reserved
10:56PM

 



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Reviewed by Karen Cino
A sad poem, with a strong message. Excellent write.

Karen
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Outstanding
love the pic (helped the emotions)
Reviewed by Chanti Niven
My dear friend,
Your poetry is always so beautiful. I found this poem deeply moving and the words so true. I miss you friend. Know that you're in my thoughts ad prayers while I'm here in England. I miss the warm South African clime. Enjoy it and think of me shivering and bundled up like a lady eskimo. Soon I will be in LA with my love and I KNOW he will warm me up. Praying that you find the same warmth in your life. A warmth that comes from inside. You really deserve it.
love Chanti
Reviewed by Paul Williams
A very sad and moving poem Elga superbly penned.

Paul;-)
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Elga,
Sad but beautifully penned.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Powerful write with a great photo to go with it!
Reviewed by Aberjhani
Painfully poignant and yet soulfully beautiful work. Enjoyed it very much.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Great message Elga!!

Thanks for sharing love!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Yes...a great comparison and wonderful message to learn.

Felix
Reviewed by jude forese
without love and hope desolation prevails ... powerful impactive poetry ...
Reviewed by George Carroll
A powerful poem that reflects the conditions in some countries and in the human mind that has lost all hope.
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