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And Finality...
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~Indigo~ Elga
Wednesday, February 08, 2006
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For where no hope is left, is left no fear.
John Milton (1608–1674)
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When a heart is dying,
And tears bleed silently
Away from prying eyes
In the darkest hours…
When loneliness greets you
Like the midday heat
Sapping your very essence
Leaving your soul depleted
Your heart desiccated
Eyes bleak lacking vitality
Face gaunt and expressionless
Laying motionless
Encouraging vultures to flock
They search the finest pickings.
You’re already so cadaverous!
Is there enough left?
Always enough for scavengers!
Devoid of any real emotion
Discomfort no longer troublesome
And finality… a welcome guest!
© Elga ~Indigo~
8 February 2006 – All Rights Reserved
12H52AM
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| Reviewed by C Hottran |
2/12/2006 |
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good write!
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/9/2006 |
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Dark but well written Elga!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Hale |
2/9/2006 |
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| A brooding write, Elga, haunting and evocative of darkness and death; and excellent. Who ever said wonderful writing had to be about beauty and love? Well done. Peace. |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
2/9/2006 |
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| I haven't read you for a bit, Elga, and I'm glad I dropped in for this one. Provocative, evocative, and well-crafted. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
2/9/2006 |
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This is a dark and uncomforatble piece Elga, exceptionally well written, the imagery the last stanza conjours is powerful and very sad. Hope your well.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/8/2006 |
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Heartbreaking; hope you are okay! You are in my prayers, darlin'! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/8/2006 |
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Elga,
I hope you're okay...darkness and deep pain in your powerfully imaged lines. You're in my prayers.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
2/8/2006 |
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| Wow! |
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